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This is great it has a lot potential you need to read it xpxpxpxpxppzp pxpxpxppzpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxppzpxpxpxpxppxpxppxpx thanks for the chapter

Is this novel dropped cause I would love another chapter it's one of the best I read so far and there not many **** wolf novels I give a 5 star cause it one of my favorite

I have a question is this novel dropped because the other book this author is working on is on Haïtus Zo thia novel too? Zo i am not drowning this nobel in a bad comments section but i just have that question wil this novel continu ore also be dropped later on

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I am trying really hard to give it a chance, but the useless, badly described sex scene in the second to last chapter was too much! (The last chapter is the author saying the story is on "semi hiatus" and I am not upset about that!) The idea/concept isn't bad, but the execution of it is lacking. ***I did ~not~ want to read about a 16 year old having a threesome with 2 ***** females!*** Here are the problems I have with the story: 1. It seems like the author is just trying to write an abbreviated timeline of the events for the 3 merging series, while playing out his fantasies of being an OP-Alpha male. . .and isn't doing a very good job. 2. It doesn't read like an actual story, just a random clumping of events. . .or a badly written story outline. 3. When there's dialogue (which isn't often), it is stilted, halting, and badly done (even with taking into consideration that English isn't the author's 1st language). 4. There is hardly any description of the surrounding, setting, or characters (descripters like "hot," "sexy," & "intelligent" don't actually tell a reader much about a person's physicality). 5. There is no consistent punctuation, capitalization, or grammar. 6. There are random words that have letters missing, which forces the reader to guess at what the author is tryjng to say. 7. Everything. . .and I mean everything is narrated by the MC. . .even other people's feelings! 8. There is no character development, at all, beside the MC. 9. The author is making the MC seem like an oversexed, domineering, chauvinist pig who only thinks about becoming OP and creating "his harem." 10. There is nothing there for readers who might not know everything/everyone from all 3 tv shows. So anyone who isn't a diehard fan of all 3 shows can/will get very confused!!!

i vote for this romance 3 stones that i received today,hope that you continue this novel .hopeful that you do 2 episodes for day .pleaseaaaaaa

Wish there were more chapters. Buts it's a shame the author probably left and may even forget about this novel. Exp Exp Exp why does the reviews need to be 140 characters long are u kidding me.

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I want another chapter the the fastest possible!! I will send power stones. Hddkkckdjrnrncjdjdjcjvuchdysyususkdkfkcxjsbahwhywyeirifkcdjdjsjnwabsh Dhhdcjdjjcjdhcjdjcjdjcjjehchshcjdjcjdjjchebebchdhuwusjf

While I do really like the concept you are going for with this story it sadly or maybe luckily could have been or will be a lot better. It just feels like paper, just two dimensions and no depth to it. There aren't really many details and you are just skipping over a lot of things. While I do know that it is a fan-fic and that it will help greatly if you know the shows before you read, but you should still be clueless about the shows and enjoy the reading but in this case, I feel that you have to have watched all three of them to fully appreciate the story. (I myself have only watched supernatural fully and maybe the first chapter of the other two) I feel like you can flesh out the story a LOT more and building up your world more too. My tip for you is to try to slow down with the writing and think through first what you write and to build up the suspense, develop the characters, fill the world they are in and just give it more detail. Right now it just feels plain while it could be so much more. I hope to see you improve this. Good luck.

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