Pietists Undertaking (Dead)

New reader here, i liked your plot and i have been addisted to it! You deserve moreeeeeee looking forward for more chaps. So interesting to readdddd i love it im liking this genre

I'm only at chapter 4 but I am so liking it. Not into the genre but I have been drawn to the plot and will surely continue reading it. Have saved it in my library. Quite very enjoyable and easy to read too. Interesting.

I like the story! At first, it was like the mc is in a game which can see his levels and upgrade skills and will soon turn into an OP character but I like how it turns out he needs to save that town (or it is a town?) and creates his own religion. What a unique one!

The author has done an exceptionally good work. Quite a few errors I might add, but who am I to judge. The author obviously knows what they're doing. Its a really good novel.

An excellent plot. Three chapters in and I was hooked with the story, the vastness of your vocabulary is commendable, I had times when I needed my handy dictionary to grasp a word. However, there are a few turning off points which incapacitates the readers from immersing in the story. First, is the background building, it is greatly lacking and that alone failed me to imbue myself within the story. Second, is the character design, whilst most of the characters have excellent distinction and rendition. Some are rather forced, making a few scenes quite awkward. That's about it. There were also things such as punctuations, cumbersome sentences and also a few grammar mistakes. But that could be easily fixed with an efficient proofreader, which is yourself. Overall, this is a great read, really liked the pacing in this. although the chapters are too short, it is enjoyable. Keep this up. Goodluck!

Alright. It's a good book. It's certainly unexpected. Cos, history + system = interesting. The world background hasn't been explained as much as I expected, but the characters are great. Just why the change in pov? Also, I know 1k words is the standard length for a chap, but it doesn't hurt to write a bit extra. As for updates, I'm not sure, cause I haven't seen the pattern yet. Overall, I found the storyline a lot more interesting than normal system ones.

The characterization is done very well and detailing is also perfect! Writing is good too! Overall It's great! Keep up the good work author! :)

The author has not delved into the world to much, not very creative world background. But everything else is great! The characterization is awesome, the story development is awesome the updates are awesome and the writing quality... You guessed it, awesome! I like the idea of an mc starting a church and purging the rest of the city if they don't listen, sounds kinda badass. Mc has system, he is chosen by a god, etc etc. Good book.

I give this novel 5 start review because the Author took time to elaborate the story of Jordi in a clear detailed way. Grammar is good. The Story plot is fantastic! The novel needs wide and active imagination to portray such world different from ours and the Author gave all his best! He got the talent for awesome story telling! Will Jordi became a powerful Mage or just a wise preacher beloved by many of his followers or he will succeeed in both? Let the Author take your imagination into another time ...space and beyond!

First thing it was a catchy one... This world was. And the way you explained your world was self descriptive. Nice work.... Keep it up author.

Kind of slow so far. Because the character starts as a blank slate and the world so far is generic fantasy world — I guess it depends on where things go from here?

Thumb's up!👍👍 At first I thought, 'woah, a story with history world.' But, then, system pop up.. 'you got me there.' This novel had properly introduce the character, his purpose in general.. The words of wisdom caught me in... (Hell yah! I got myself a dictionary just to understand some unfamiliar words) *scratching my head* The plot was cool.. (I love reading about angels and gods/goddesses) There's just a typos errors, maybe.. the use of quotation marks.. Keep up the good work!

Its only seven chapters long so I can't say much. It's an interesting read if you are a fan of Litrpg or stories with game elements, you should check it out.

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