Immortal Tree
Author: FeatherlyDuck
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An irritating, impudent, and arrogant bother, that had just been accepted in college, finally died. Good riddance.
As he was passing into the afterlife, a figure approached him and asked if he wanted to be reincarnated. Of course, the youth accepted, but not without infuriating the being and was punished.
What happened to him? Who knows.
[Writing Prompts Contest 62：Become a tree]
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An interesting take on becoming a tree; it’s very realistic in an odd way. I like it. The writing is also good. I’m not too fond of the characters though. The MC is a little too arrogant in my opinion; although, I question why he ran away from girl as it seemed opposite to his character. Yalia is ok, but she can’t be described with many adjectives; in other words, she’s kinda bland. The world building was put in a chuck with several passages on all the different cultivation stages. Either this part has to be more concise, or spread out and revealed bit by bit in chapters. For example, only explain up to the level she’s at. Otherwise the world building is good. The plot felt a bit contrived in the beginning. Also, the jumping around in chapter two was hard to follow. I think if you just had it chronologically to where she planted the seed and he woke up and grew, the story would flow better. I also like the subtle humor of the ‘soybean.’ Overall, great start!