Living forever and wandering from one world to another on the whims of a system that bound itself to you without a single 'by your leave' isn't all that it's cracked up to be.
Su Li dies of chronic illness and is bound to such a system. Now, this could be considered a blessing in disguise for others.
However, the trouble is that she isn't interested in a system and to compound it all, two men - two distinctly different men - keep on following her on this world-hopping business.
Two men as incompatible as fire and water, as different as the sun and the moon.
The only thing they share in common is Su Li and their sheer determination to not leave her side.
One of them remembers their past worlds each time they start anew, whereas the other doesn't.
One of them says that she lights up his dark world and the other says that she is his entire world.
One of them says that it doesn't matter if she loves him or not, she is his to cherish and pamper.
The other says that she is the only one he would ever love.
Though sceptical and wary, Su Li decides to put her best foot forward and make the best out of her circumstances.
Why are these two men trailing her?
Will she be able to get rid of the shackles placed on her by the system?
Will she repudiate her deal with the system?
Will she find out the answers to all her doubts and questions or will silence and melancholy be her only answer?
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An excerpt from the book :
"You care that much about Zixi? Because of him, you are ready to discard concerns about your own safety? Is it worth it? Is Xun Zixi really worth it?"
Su Li was agitated by Li Rong's unceasing questions.
She weighed her words properly and said in a hoarse voice, "It's worth it."
Suddenly her eyes glazed in tears and she repeated her words, "He is worth it to me."
Li Rong was stunned to see her in tears and was rendered speechless by the conviction behind her answer.
"Well, I can't change your mind. You won't leave him in a lurch and I can't turn my back on you."
They rushed back the way they had come and prayed that it wouldn't be too late on their part.
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Heya everyone I really didn't want to review my own novel but am writing this to inform everyone the I have edited the first arc. Therefore, all the paragraph length problems and the few grammatical errors that were sprinkled here and there have also been solved. More than the paragraph length, I had been worried about any grammatical errors that I had made since am one of those Grammar Nazis lol Don't forget to read, review, recommend, vote and comment on the story. Those few things are infinitely sweeter than marshmallows to me 😁😂😛
I am really enjoying the story very much. The idea of two ML's great and I just can't wait for more.!!!! Thumbs up to the Author!!! Keep up the good work.
Fufufu~ I wanted to give a review too 😗 It's hard to find a decent Quick transmigration novel with a female lead that I haven't read. Happy to find this gem~ Has stable updates and the plotline is progressing quite well, it has been only the first arc so far but I love it :p Keep doing you thing author-san!
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3..2..1.. [It's review system here! Welcome to the review world!] Lol. I came here and intended to read your story from a writer perspective but then.. Boom! There I go reverted back to being just a reader that was lost in a good story! I didn't expect that I could find a good novel system here, this is a hidden gem. I'm anticipating for more chapter and improvement from the author.
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The novel has a very good concept of a female which is important for two men which are contrary of each other,the novel's author is very experienced and it is shown in quality of her novel,the synopsis is enough to understand how good the novel is.
So amazing to stumble upon such a hidden gem. Really waiting for more. I actually like the world and characters. Can't wait for more updates
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Amazing work i really love the female protagonist Yu Yan and The Sistem, put those two and a great story you Will get a perfect novel, keep going i Will add yo my library for no lose any chapter in the future ...
The plot is progressing good. Not too slow or too fast, just right. The characters are great too.... The story is interesting.... I love ghosts.. Heheheh.. Keep it up author...
The author's vast vocabulary of words made the flow of the novel pleasing to read. The characters are also superb since there's life breathed into them. There are no dumb story development, everything is well thought as far as I had read.
That's an awesome conceptual plot there. What's more, I just don't know why but it seems that plot was made only for this world created by this this novel and only for these characters, all of it fits amazingly. Long way of saying that the flow is fantastic.
Just as author claims — writing quality is top notch! The story is really enjoyable. Development is on good speed too. Must read novel! Keep up the good work, Author-sama!
I would have rated it 5 if not for unreliable update schedule and slow development. But still it is one of those quick transmigration stories that are realistic, characters are humane not too op. There is right amount of comedy, tragedy and anticipation.