While MARTIAL arts secretly developed after the modernisation of the world, the situation was in chaos when a young man came forward to take over the martial temple and to become there God...
Good work and quite promising, we'll see how this story grows and how you can manipulate the characters further, Anyway nice work and keep it going.....👍
6 years ago
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Alex7
This was one of a kind a fresh idea and it looked a lot cooler this way than the normal novels that I've read earlier, So, lets hope you can keep up this spirit.
6 years ago
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Shelly1
One of the best originals that I've read, So far keep up the Good work.The story line is quite different the previous ones that I've read so overall its a good start and I hope that you can continue to write these rather than getting disheartened and leaving it.
6 years ago
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WIND
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6 years ago
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WIND
Nice work , Dude .Keep at it .I'm working on the concept art.I have given Michael black hair and a red Headband. The dragons are blood red and Golden as you asked of me.
Good work and quite promising, we'll see how this story grows and how you can manipulate the characters further, Anyway nice work and keep it going.....👍
This was one of a kind a fresh idea and it looked a lot cooler this way than the normal novels that I've read earlier, So, lets hope you can keep up this spirit.
One of the best originals that I've read, So far keep up the Good work.The story line is quite different the previous ones that I've read so overall its a good start and I hope that you can continue to write these rather than getting disheartened and leaving it.
Reveal Spoiler
Nice work , Dude .Keep at it .I'm working on the concept art.I have given Michael black hair and a red Headband. The dragons are blood red and Golden as you asked of me.