The grammar isn’t that great but I like the concept of the story. The author does have a sense of humour, but the some bits of the story doesn’t really make sense.
6 years ago
2
Daoist_kit15
As it needs improvement to the character and plot, try to make it more knowledgeable to the background of the story. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
4 years ago
0
Im_too_stupid
I absolutely love this Webnovel just....i looove op mc’s and i just dont care how bad Your grammar or writing skills are just one complaint please update more frequently
5 years ago
0
AraAra
I actually, like your work, it's just that it's lacking in the plot, setting, and grammar in the contents of the entire chapter that confused me.
SO PLEASE FIX IT.
6 years ago
0
CHAOS
I’m giving my novel a 4 star because 5 star is too much but if you like it rate 5 stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.
The grammar isn’t that great but I like the concept of the story. The author does have a sense of humour, but the some bits of the story doesn’t really make sense.
As it needs improvement to the character and plot, try to make it more knowledgeable to the background of the story. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I absolutely love this Webnovel just....i looove op mc’s and i just dont care how bad Your grammar or writing skills are just one complaint please update more frequently
I actually, like your work, it's just that it's lacking in the plot, setting, and grammar in the contents of the entire chapter that confused me. SO PLEASE FIX IT.
I’m giving my novel a 4 star because 5 star is too much but if you like it rate 5 stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.