The Strongest Unknown Race

Nope nope nope nope. First chapter alone the amount of grammar mistakes makes me want to gouge my eyes out. This is a non native english speaker and maybe a terrible translator with it. Either missing words so you have to go back and read sentence again for it to kind of make sense or they just don't make any sense at all

I cannot follow the story at all becuase the grammar is so terrible, I read out to chapter 10 see if improved at all I did not. The only way to make this story readable is to fix the grammar in it

The grammar makes me want to die. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! It’s so bad!!! Arghhhh!!! I’ve lost one million brain cells and I’m a potato!

OMG I don’t know what country you are coming from but I didn’t start reading this because the grammar is soooooooooooo so so so soooo bad just in the introduction alone if your not from a English based nation write it in your own language then google translate it or something if you are then please go back to the third grade I’m sorry I don’t want to be mean and it actually sounded fairly decent from the introduction but if you write a book the very first requirement is to have a decent grammar in any language other wise it ruins the story and turns it into home work of some kind just trying to understand and in my honest opinion you need to get better and grammar or get a editor so people will not need to burn their brains out thinking about what your writing.

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