Septem

Please fix your grammar before uploading more, ALMOST unreadable at this state. 2/5 The story is ok, typical wish fulfillment.2/5 OP character and edgy personality, nothing unique though. 2/5 World background is ok. 3/5 I can give you a full fletched critic but it's 11PM and I have lectures tommorow. I hope you can understand. Also keep writing you cannot improve without practice

The story seems good in concept but the writing ,grammar is just not readable for me ,I'd suggest either get an editor who can make it better or don't write in English

I love this novel. It is amazing to see the concept of "seven other personalities" in one! I can't wait to see what the future holds for them. I also hope, that as they grow together, they bond and learn to help one and other. Rather than having each personality working for their own good. Keep up the great work! I am looking forward to see how this novel goes!

Hey... this is another shameless act of author who is rate and review their own novel... Well basically this is my first time novel and I still learning about it a lot. Hope you enjoy read this novel. See ya around.

Exelent work for the momet it has a badass mc but with his own problems and a good backstory a bit op but not to much. It also has a nice character development in the story but i recomend add more to secondary characters like his mother and brothers. It truly maked my be hiped up when I started to read it.

I like this novel very much although it is not much different form other novels but it has it's special unique story i wonder is there any other novel on multiple personality

The writing quality is just horrible,there is some sentences I have to read a few times to get what it mean. But the novel is very great,seriously, it's original. Continue like this, but you really need an editor or something.

Good, story delivery quite smooth. Good starter for huge and wide plot while it kept light for reading. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Your writing is beautiful… I look forward to your writing... I wish I could write like you... You write how I feel, even if I can’t express it... Your writing inspires me... I falling in love with your novel. I hope can read it every time, everywhere... I hope you writing this novel to the end... Good job and thank you for your hard working to finishing all chapter.........

Continue author, I love this novel since I read it earlier, although there is one thing that bothers me and it is that the progress of events is slow.

Grammar is absolutely unreadable. Story seems alright but sorta cliche. I like the personalities though Ndndndndndndndndncnvrksockfmenznfnekxk8dydhebvjdkxkkcdjbeebdbdbfbrneffkivivsiernnfvjdkeiejfbfbjckxdjenfncjkfdkjrnrnf

Good novel ...................... more update.................🤴🙂😙🙂😋🦁😭🧘‍♂️😭🐯😭😐😙🐯😋🧘‍♂️🤣🧘‍♂️😭🙂🤣☺️😙🦁🦁👧🧘‍♂️🤣🏃‍♂️😋😐👴🧘‍♂️👧🧗‍♀️🙈🧗‍♀️😭🙂👸☺️👯‍♂️😋🧘‍♂️😭🏃‍♂️😙😐😊😑🙂☺️😑🐯🤴👯‍♂️😋🙂😭🦁

The story is kinda mysterious but has it own flavour it is quite hard to get the content in some of the chapters but it is really interesting to read .Hope that more chapters be released.

I got to say even though they're some spelling mistakes , this is a great read! Please Update Faster!! Quick Summary: The MC is the embodiment of the seven deadly sins, with his own personality intact. He get's summoned to a new world with all his op knowledge and, It's a GG from there.