The story has a lot of potential, there are lots of coincidences however which makes me a bit weary. That said. It seems to be heading an interesting direction.
It does however need frequent updates or the whole thing posted in 1 go to make it work spending time on tough. Assuming people are like me. They have quite a lot of fics to follow and this one has not been interesting enough to make it worth waiting a month per chapter.
That said. I really do look forward to seeing more.
5 years ago
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lectorem
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5 years ago
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Captainbabayaga
I like crossover time travel theme.
I got only one thing to say.
Dont drop it.
Its a wonderful novel your writing.
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The story has a lot of potential, there are lots of coincidences however which makes me a bit weary. That said. It seems to be heading an interesting direction. It does however need frequent updates or the whole thing posted in 1 go to make it work spending time on tough. Assuming people are like me. They have quite a lot of fics to follow and this one has not been interesting enough to make it worth waiting a month per chapter. That said. I really do look forward to seeing more.
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I like crossover time travel theme. I got only one thing to say. Dont drop it. Its a wonderful novel your writing. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฃ๐๐๐๐๐๐ฑ๐ฑ๐ฑ๐ฑ๐ฑ๐ฑ๐ฑ๐ฑ