Lust Incarnate

Ok, the content is very interesting and I look forward to the developments. The grammar is good and so is the writing. But Author, you should change the MC's name, or at least his last name. Zeus Peerless? Dude that sounds so weird. It doesn't have the 'cool' effect you want the viewers to feel about his name. Now I don't know of a proper Last Name that would go well with the first name that is 'Zeus', so you might as well change his first name as well. Other than that, the book seems promising, and the way you use anime characters or even characters from H-Manga's as an actual character in your story is kinda weird, specialy Mihawk, LMAO. You better be careful in the characters you add though, cause it might ruin the story, as its pretty difficult to come up with proper character and story if you just straight up add characters like those. But its up to you on what you wanna do mate. Oh and the world background is kinda weird. I feel that this story would suit better with a medieval fantasy setting, not the Sci-Fi Technology and Magic stuff combined.

I'm going to rate you novel 5 star become I love your amazing works, and because I'm completely sure that this novel we'll be another great one for sure, so keep going and don't disappoint us 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😉

Love the Mc... :) Love the novel... :) Love the Girls.... :) Love the H scene... :) Just hope the author doesn't drop it, which I won't love :(

meh meh meh extremely bad grammar meh meh meh bringing in characters from different anime into an original world meh meh meh use your own original characters meh meh meh

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Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.

Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.

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Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.

Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.

Big ups to the author and other readers. I await more chapters. Story is so interesting. Writing quality - mechanical accuracy, spelling of words, punctuation, translation, and vocabulary must be improved. High stability of story update, keep it up! World background or setting should even be real and not limited to only anime worlds.

I like the novel alot so far(12 chaps), i also like how the author asks his readers for their opinion. Giving it 4 stars for now cuz it’s still the beginning might change later.

Thanks for the novel😉😋😊😉😊😉😚😉😚😚😉😊😚😉😚😉😊😊😉😊😉😊😊😉😊😉😊😉😊😊😉😊😉😊😉😊😉😊😊😉😊😊😉😊😉😊😊😉😊😉😊😉😊😊😉😚😚😉😚😉😚😊😉😚😉😚😉😚😊😉😚😉😚😚😉😚😉😚😚😉😚😉😚😚😉😚😉😚😚😉😚😉😚😉😚😚😉😚😉😚😉😚