I love how Lia is realising her dream when she was totally disappointed , I'm so excited to know what will be the suite and what will Jimin do .
Keep going you're amazing ❤
6 years ago
6
Fan_Tastic
I will obviously support your story cause it's the kind of stories that I was looking for , I will keep encouraging you . You work so hard and you deserve to have more support sweety ❤🤗
6 years ago
5
Ar_My
I opened this account for the BTS writting competition to support armys and I was surprised of the talents . I didn't regret to read your story because it is really good
6 years ago
5
Daoist793180
The story is original , the character are good and the development is great . I will support this story and I think that everyone have to support it , I will add it to my library 😉❤
Fighting
6 years ago
5
noctifer
Whilst you may not have the best grammar, prose nor spelling, the emotions that spill out of this novel is amazing. Lia is a pure-hearted person, you can see that through her words.
I recommend you learn about punctuation and how to dialogue! This way, your writing won't seem messy.
The plot can't really be judged due to 2 chapters, but there's a feeling of hope, excitement, and anxiousness that any ARMY can relate to.
Love, from a fellow author and ARMY
You're doing great. Keep it up
Good work. Nice plot. Love the characters. keep up the good work. and keep making new stories. Awesome job. Excited to read more of your works. Fighting!! <3 <3 <3 <3
Reveal Spoiler
I love how Lia is realising her dream when she was totally disappointed , I'm so excited to know what will be the suite and what will Jimin do . Keep going you're amazing ❤
I will obviously support your story cause it's the kind of stories that I was looking for , I will keep encouraging you . You work so hard and you deserve to have more support sweety ❤🤗
I opened this account for the BTS writting competition to support armys and I was surprised of the talents . I didn't regret to read your story because it is really good
The story is original , the character are good and the development is great . I will support this story and I think that everyone have to support it , I will add it to my library 😉❤ Fighting
Whilst you may not have the best grammar, prose nor spelling, the emotions that spill out of this novel is amazing. Lia is a pure-hearted person, you can see that through her words. I recommend you learn about punctuation and how to dialogue! This way, your writing won't seem messy. The plot can't really be judged due to 2 chapters, but there's a feeling of hope, excitement, and anxiousness that any ARMY can relate to. Love, from a fellow author and ARMY You're doing great. Keep it up
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Good work. Nice plot. Love the characters. keep up the good work. and keep making new stories. Awesome job. Excited to read more of your works. Fighting!! <3 <3 <3 <3
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