Wandless - A Harry Potter Fanfic
...Authors note...
Just rambling, feel free to skip...
Started this novel testing a lot of things out. Only when I started nearing the end of the first book and went on to the next is when I think I found some footing on how this will be written.
In short, while the first book had some questionable decisions (and there will most definitely be more to come), I think the process helped me gain a better understanding of how I want this story to go and how I can improve on my writing skills.
Well enough of me rambling, as always, thanks to everyone that gave this novel a chance and those that continue sticking around despite my slow updates, see you all around!
(END OF RAMBLING)
SUMMARY
Vincent Wong was a boy with no home. He wandered the streets of London hoping to find a place to belong. One day he's accidentally taken to a new world. One where magical creatures, flying cars, and magic are just common day things. Follow Vincent as he searches for a place to belong.
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"WHY THE BLOODY HELL IS THIS CAR FLYING?!"
((All Character rights except my own goes to J.K Rowling))
Going be a bit shameless and give myself five stars. Deal with it. I just wanted to say something to those who want to review my work. Criticism is accepted if there are reasons and tips on how to improve. If possible, don't review just because you want exp or hate on it without reason. Try to review what it is that you liked or disliked about the story. I see this done to a lot of other people's stories and I guess I just want to know what I did well and what might have been a mistake. If someone comments about what I should do or what I should take out of the story I probably won't listen to it since, as it's my story, I do whatever I want with it. This story was made to improve myself and see how far my writing can take me. Not to create the perfect story (Although that sounds good) Some may like it, some may drop it. But if you decide to give it a go, thanks in advance. Thank you for reading my story, and I hope to see you guys again.
Compared to most HP fics on this site this one might be considered decent, but overall it's really mediocre. The premise sounds fresh if anything - the story about muggle boy in HP world? Sounds interesting, right? Unfortunately, it becomes a stupid cliche in the very first chapter. So our MC is a street rat, and despite having no one to care for, and no one to care for him, he's still some paragon of morality - I mean he jumped on some thugs to save some random old man from being mugged, and then becomes a vigilante hunting ex-military drug dealers (***** people) at the prime age of 13. And of course - during all this time the police and everyone else can't really find this average boy, who's been doing their job for them for years. I know it's only a fic and so on, but I just can't take all of this ridiculousness
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I haven't read a harry potter fanfic quite like this before. It's not perfect but quite enjoyable nonetheless. Hope you continue and 5 stars for being original. The long chapters are a welcome sight.
🌹💎 Great story. Please please please update. We miss you.
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🌹💎 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! I love this story.💜 Please update and continue. NEED MORE
One of the best Harry Potter FF I've read. Would be given a 10/10 is not for the slow updates. Hilarious to the extreme................................ .
Absolutely love this story so far i just ask that what ever you do with the story please just dont drop it i wish to see this story completed
Great story. One of the best I've read so far. Please continue with your story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. MORE MORE MORE
nice, is it going to keep going after the last book? wow its so dumb that i have to write more than 140 characters just to give you a better overall rating...
140+ characters ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ ̿̿ ̿̿ ̿̿ ̿'̿'\̵͇̿̿\З= ( ▀ ͜͞ʖ▀) =Ε/̵͇̿̿/’̿’̿ ̿ ̿̿ ̿̿ ̿̿ ▄︻̷̿┻̿═━一 ( ͡°( ͡° ͜ʖ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)ʖ ͡°) ͡°) ʕ•ᴥ•ʔ (▀̿Ĺ̯▀̿ ̿) (ง ͠° ͟ل͜ ͡°)ง ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ ಠ_ಠ (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ ̿'̿'\̵͇̿̿\З=( ͠° ͟ʖ ͡°)=Ε/̵͇̿̿/'̿̿ ̿ ̿ ̿ ̿ ̿ (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ) [̲̅$̲̅(̲̅5̲̅)̲̅$̲̅] ┬┴┬┴┤ ͜ʖ ͡°) ├┬┴┬┴ ( ͡°╭͜ʖ╮͡° ) (͡ ͡° ͜ つ ͡͡°) (• Ε •) (ง'̀-'́)ง (ಥ﹏ಥ) ﴾͡๏̯͡๏﴿ O'RLY? (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻ [̲̅$̲̅(̲̅ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°̲̅)̲̅$̲̅] (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ (☞ﾟ∀ﾟ)☞ | (• ◡•)| (❍ᴥ❍Ʋ) (◕‿◕✿) (ᵔᴥᵔ) (╯°□°)╯︵ ꞰOOQƎƆⱯɟ (¬‿¬) (☞ﾟヮﾟ)☞ ☜(ﾟヮﾟ☜) (づ￣ ³￣)づ Ლ(ಠ益ಠᲚ) ಠ╭╮ಠ ̿ ̿ ̿'̿'\̵͇̿̿\З=(•_•)=Ε/̵͇̿̿/'̿'̿ ̿ /╲/\╭( ͡° ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° ͡°)╮/\╱\ (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`) ♪~ ᕕ(ᐛ)ᕗ ♥‿♥ ༼ つ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° ༽つ ༼ つ ಥ_ಥ ༽つ (╯°□°）╯︵ ┻━┻ ( ͡ᵔ ͜ʖ ͡ᵔ ) ヾ(⌐■_■)ノ♪ ~(˘▾˘~) ◉_◉ \ (•◡•) / (~˘▾˘)~ (._.) ( L: ) ( .-. ) ( :L ) (._.) ༼ʘ̚ل͜ʘ̚༽ ༼ ºل͟º ༼ ºل͟º ༼ ºل͟º ༽ ºل͟º ༽ ºل͟º ༽ ┬┴┬┴┤(･_├┬┴┬┴ ᕙ(⇀‸↼‶)ᕗ ᕦ(Ò_Óˇ)ᕤ ┻━┻ ︵ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ︵ ┻━┻ ⚆ _ ⚆ (•_•) ( •_•)>⌐■-■ (⌐■_■) (｡◕‿‿◕｡)
its quite good, has good potential, keep up the good work author --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
you still here.