OMG very hot! Good read if you are alone or with a friend. It can be a little rough and i detest the use of the n word. There was no need for it in my opinion.
4 years ago
4
jdrodgers50
It was an okay story. But I really wasn’t getting into it. Domination really isn’t my thing. I think it was poorly written and went just a little bit too fast.
5 years ago
3
Zenobia
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review.
I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly.
Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you!
https://rb.gy/5s05wc
4 years ago
1
GoD_SovereignJ
Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.
OMG very hot! Good read if you are alone or with a friend. It can be a little rough and i detest the use of the n word. There was no need for it in my opinion.
It was an okay story. But I really wasn’t getting into it. Domination really isn’t my thing. I think it was poorly written and went just a little bit too fast.
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! https://rb.gy/5s05wc
Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.