*Yawn "What mission do i have to do next."

"Ermm...  you have to go and act as the villan at some cliché drama , the rotten protagonists will use you as a stepping stone to get near the male lead and make you look like a villain and her as a innocent person being harassed."

"..."

"So do you want to continue."

"mhmm.. "

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I really really love your story and can't wait for because it was amazing and beautiful really ♥️ it and can't wait for your next update please update more if you have a chance🙏🙏🙏😊😊😊👍👍👍👌👌👌👌🤞🤞

(not a very proper review, just my thoughts)
So far I'm liking the story, the punctuation is sometimes a bit off like there are sometimes runoff sentences and no commas where there should be. And the 'I' is written as 'i' but that's just me being nitpicky.
In one of the later chapters, there's a repeating (whywhywhywhywhy, etc) and I feel like there's too much? I had to scroll down for so long ah
The story is good but there's not enough world-building. If there were more then that would be great.
Not sure what it meant by using 'half his powers' though?
Also when MC dies, he meets this guy asking for help and accepts it? Not sure why he did and is not at least a bit freaked out.
There's a chapter with character info on it, but I feel like it spoils the story a little. I would have just put in the characters that were already introduced in the story rather than just say, hey, this is the ML and the MC and the villain, they like this stuff and hate that stuff.
Though I hope author-sama updates this :)

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In my opinion the story is very good. My only issue with it is that it is too heavily focused on the relationship. If the author would add more background and plot the story would be amazing.