Universal Knowledge of the Dao

The writing quality is definitely good. The world building is also quite fantastic. Worth a read. The charts and plot are very specific, which is a good thing.

I like the original take on cultivation novels, with a girl completely powerless and who doesn't want to be there even. I'm curious to see how it will evolve, but so far the characters a good and interesting, the world building is nice. Also the writing is really good, keep up the good work author !

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I don't see much problems in the grammar, and the writing style is satisfactory! It's an amazing story 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄

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If I have to say, the novels starts out fresh. The grammar errors are negligible since they don't disrupt my immersion into the story. I personally felt the pace of the story to be a bit fast for my preferences but other than that it is a good read.

This author is great! The writing quality is perfect, easy to read and understand. The story is interesting and slightly unexpected, albeit in a good way. The world and characters are very detailed and come to life. Looking forward to the next chapters to come!

I like how the story builds up. How the characters are sketched. It's catchy. The English is pretty good too and there aren't grammatical errors that will irk someone while reading the book. If anyone who likes to read cultivator stories then they should definitely try this one.

I'm gonna be concise, I hope you enjoyed my story. The uploading schedule is really messy because it's my side story for now. I obviously allow constructive criticism, so please tell me in the comments or the reviews how to make my story better according to you. Thank you !

I really like the characters and development of the story so far. It fills a big gap in the genre by having a female lead who is legitimately capable and by avoiding the nasty ***ism and sexual violence that seems so pervasive. I also enjoy that the main character's advantages don't remove the need to work hard for what she gets or negate the value of her efforts. The plot and environment are interesting and intimate enough to feel more fleshed out than is typical at this stage in other novels. I'm interested to see more of the world so please keep it up.

Way too slow starting cultivation with the resources she had It's frustrating to see her being so god damn oblivious to everything that she goes full retard Could've been great but turned out to be a massive disappointment