Harry Potter: Library Of Heavens Magic Path(Closed))

This Story has me interested after i read the Titel. I find Library of Heavens Path LoHP absolute OP and was interested was the Author was making of this. The first and secon chapter was interesting but after it is gooing down really fast. The writing Quality is average 3 Stars Stability of Updates 3 Stars: Not enough chapters to really give a good answer normaly i would only give 1-2max. Down to fast. Story Development: 1Star then you have no Story, more of a rectical from his Achivment and what he was making. It was to fast and it was not logical Character: 1 Star What Design? World background: 2 Star For minimal Try The LoHP is OP but what you have writen is not posible. The Ability from LoHP is. 1: Scan Books 2. Find Flaws in all Books and what you scan 3. Absorbtion from knowlege with Golden Page 4. Make a better Version or/and flawless Technic, knowlege. But it can't make new knowlege that was never introduced. You have no knowlege what was posible with Technology to the Time from 1985-1990. That is the Timeframe from your story i was really hopefull but this sorry The LoHP is not Omniscient it know only so much how you

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One of the most well written stories I’ve read on this site and also very enjoyable I think the story won’t be action atleast since mc seems to be the leader of everything but let’s see what Author has in mind first The only complaint I’d have with the story is the low ammount of character progression and how everything seems to go mc way, should’ve added some politics considering the scale of the things he’s done, perhaps some action with an assassination here and there since it’s not probable for mc not to meet any resistance at all Keep up the good work and I hope you don’t drop

This "author" is able to write in the style of "I went there and did it". This is where the abilities of the "author" end. This is not fan fiction or a FAIRY TALE - this is a banal draft. I was sorry to waste time on this, so catch 1 *

The mc remakes the world pretty much. This writing is a waiste of time. There is no story just about changes mc does to the world. Very minor interaction with potter world people besides goblins. He pretty much takes all his future knowledge of muggle companies and buys them then upgrades tech then does the same in the magical world.

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I like this story it just goes to fvcking fast..................................................................................................................................................

Was interested to see LoHP in a hp fanfic, but was not certainly expexting this. After reading the book, only a quote remains in my head „ Real life needs no logic, but a Film or similar media needs one“. And i found many illogical settings in the story.

absolutely condensed read but a fun no brainer read too.

man this is a good fast paced book you could have done more or add more to the book it would be a great book well anyway nice going good job author 👍👍👍👍

suuper interesring, is a regret finish so fast all things ^^~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~ sssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssss

La verdad es una inspiración si voy a hacer un fanfic la verdad es que me gustó por la imaginación del autor espero que alguien tomé lo que hiciste de este fanfic y lo mejore o algo par leer 😎😁

Its truly a fantastic story I was hooked from chapter two and can't wait for more. An interesting idea looking forward to seeing where this goes he's changed a lot but it's all good changes and they make sense.

Library of Heaven's path is such a cool power. Unfortunately, before you enjoy it, you'll have to read through three unbearable chapters of Harry getting his inheritance at Gringotts. It was terrible. I can't even get past the third chapter. Just nonstop Lordship ex Machina.