Harem God of Origin (ATG)

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What an ugly thing huh author! Deleting comments you don't like. You post a story on this website and you can't receive any criticism, really that?

THis story is more like a drama show than a cultivation novel. useless dramas with his family member. He gives all his treasure to his family and wives. He doesn't even try to cultivate himself. WTF. He should try to cultivate himself first. He wastes his time not cultivating. But when he encounters stronger enemy he then sacrifices his remaining pitiful cultivation which makes him cripple. he agains starts to cultivate. I bet that if he dedicates only a single year for himself in cultivation after his second rebirth, he would reach the peak of the existence in one fell sweep.

I read 63 naruto type filler chapters. I don't know if I feel insulted or cheated. I came with "low" expectations, but I am leaving with a ball of frustration in my stomach. The author reincarnated a boy who, according to him, is apathetic without love to another person other than his mother / sisters. So far so good, we have another yiba tatsuba, when I read that I was going to be a "" "realistic character" "" I was happy, thinking that this MC was not going to make mistakes left and right. BUT! I was wrong, for some reason he changed his behavior from 0, at first he was sentimental to the point that he injures himself to help his adoptive brother, then he became perverted for some reason all women are shotas and he lets himself be humiliated by them with a cowardly excuse that honestly seems horrible to me is as if you hate your MC, then he became delusional he began to conspire and become paranoid for his stupid actions, example: he released the ice phoenix he lied about some bullsh * t and she fell in love / engaged the MC, only to then seal it again for fear that things may change in the future, here I just have to tell you something: FOR YOU TO VISIT THEM AND ACT MYSTERIOUS JUST TO THEN SEAL THEIR MEMORIES LIKE A LADYBIRD ??????! ! Tell me I do not know what you thought when you wrote all that nonsense filler but for me it is an insult to fellow writers, here you could say something like "I write for my satisfaction" or something like that, f * ck you, I don't care if it you did for your satisfaction or for monetary necessity but this novel is an insult to the novels if you want to receive something you need to write something with meaning. Well continuing with my review, after all his personality changes the MC turned into an arrogant young master cannon fodder with stupid decisions to the level of stupid wuxia villain that any random cultivator can kill which is unbearable to read. What I mean is, I liked the theme of the story, example: he was a filial child who wanted the best for his family but who is realistic and can do everything possible to satisfy his loved ones, but then you started to ruin everything and instead of having satisfaction when reading, the only thing that I receive is a desire to hit someone, call me aggressive but your novel is frustrating for the reader. I wanted to write more about this novel but I don't want to waste more brain cells on a novel that I am leaving. Ok thanks for reading my ramblings sorry if it is not understood but I translated it from Google

MC is given powers by a powerful entity, sent to the ATG universe. MC becomes extreammly OP really fast. Then is nurfed after 60 chapters. There is so much unnecessary information. Makes it seem like he is just trying to fill up the word count. there's way to much unnecessary drama. His cultivation goes up then down then up again, its like a dam roller coaster. It feels like there has not been much progress because of that. ATG is one of my favorite novels and i love reading fan fics about it, but i cant keep going with this one. Give it a go, you may like it but i just don't.

Trash and boringg,waste of time ............................................................................................................

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Even epilogue takes too much chapters.. Let him go to next world already. You monggoloy!. The atg arc is freaking boring and slow slow slow slow slow pace. I just hope. The next world is not boring like you

Story is boring and characters are plain. I didnt want to say more but 140 is limitting me. Only saving grace is your grammar everything else that I have actually liked is copied from main story so this is simply boring and plain. MC wasnt even qualified to be Beta male let alone Alfa its sad tbh. Good start everyhing else not worth mentioning.

Guys, regarding the power system, I just want you to be patient and wait until after the First Tribulation and Rebirth mini-arcs! His power system in the novel will change maybe 2 times, or more accurately it will evolve, and this is especially pertaining his skills and physiques. Once he leaves the ATG Verse a new power system is introduced so try not to pay too much focus on such things. So things may not make sense in a singular chapter but over mini-arcs (10-20 chapters) they should be explained, if there is still confusion after just ask me here I will try explain it clearly!

and boom, you have really done it author,u will be now releasing 1 chapter per day isn't it ? You have more than 350+ chapters stacked up and such slow release, i get it that you are writhing for patreon but we too here are reading this story,if now u get so greedy people sooner or later will start stop reading this story ...cuz its not a original novel but instead a fan-fic and you should understand that we readers are here to read a fan-fic nothing else and out there there are tons of ATG and campione,fate-series fan-fic ,so get ur readers hooked atleast realease the same 2 chapters that you used to do everyday or we will loose interest sooner or later ..and if you want to realease only 1 chapter atleast give us some mass-release...now u may say if there is so many good fan-fic out there and why am I still here? it is cuz of the same reason why u had wrote this novel! didn't u write it forus to read?So as a reader i will readeven if u want it or not...but can't really say any thing if you had written the story only for god-da*m money!

I like the way you build the story. But I think you build it too long. Also I think you should use time skip so the reader not to boring and the story not to bland. I think you should jump to his wedding ( you can shorten it because there is no important event in there)and go to the other continent to study his medical knowledge and get his real sky poison pearl and another wife. I think you should make him train the sword comprehension or body training

This has good potential so far Only worry is that mc wishes are quite overpowered so I wonder how that will affect story pace MC doesn’t seem that apathetic however it is early in so I will judge after a few dozen chapters Xp