Machine translation with 0 editing... if you can read the extract below without problem maybe the story is good...
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extract chapter 5:
Name: -Xiao Luo = MC
-Zhao Mengqi = Ex girlfriend
-Huahaifeng + Hua Haifeng + Huahai Feng + Huahai Summit + Hua Shao = Young master and new boyfriend of Zhao Mengqi)
Situation: Young master taunt MC and MC kick Young master...
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Zhao Mengqi was completely on the spot, staring at the eyes, incredulously looking at Xiao Luo who had murderous aura, how can he not believe that huahai summit was kicked by Xiao Luo for a meter away.
"Hey, congratulation to the host for getting 50 points!" system hint sounds.
"Fifty o'clock ? How come there will be fifty?"
Xiao Luo looked around and found out that there were fout security guards at the gate and saw what happened here.
Soon, four security guard ran up.
"Hua shao!"
The four people together with Zhao Mengqi of came back to his sense and raised Hua Haifeng together.
Hua Haifeng was furious, pointing to Xiao Luo and yelling:"Hit, give me a fight, I want him to leave the door of Huahai!"
The four security guard dare to defy, and then say that this is an opportunity for meritotious performence. It is impossible to say that because of the lessons for Hua Haifeng, a person has since swept away.Although they saw the power of Xiao Luo, they pulled out the black lacquered iron rod hanging auround their waist and swooped up toward Xiao Luo.
How could Xiao Luo fear the security of the four gatekeepers in the district?..................
5 years ago
5
a_commoner
A decent story, an MC with great personality. The pace is not fast nor slow witch keep it enjoyable. I wish you continue translating this novel, and i hope you work on the quality, its unreadable right now. Machine translation, i can do it myself.
5 years ago
2
IPreferLonerMc
The grammar is fucking bimbo. The beginning was bearable but then the sentences didn’t even start to make sense and the pronouns were mixed up every other sentence. It’s just so bad in grammar. Plot is okay, by no update in a month.
5 years ago
2
Hawk9970
Unreadable garbage, I can't believe someone dared to defile this novel with this auto translations bs
Im sure this novel is a novel with potential but with this I can't... This is so bad
5 years ago
2
FloatingLetters
There's wayyyyyyyyyyy better translations out there, so don't give up on this guys [img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
3 years ago
0
James_Mahony
Sh*t Translation a Waist of Time To Read Makes no Sense 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡🤬🤬🤬🤬😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
4 years ago
0
Elina_K
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
4 years ago
0
Insane_Pumpkin
Unredable it's not even worth trying. You can try find berable translation on other sites thou.
**. How in the hell this novel have 5 stars? only one comment giving 5 stars and most won't even give 2 stars gg webnovel.
Machine translation with 0 editing... if you can read the extract below without problem maybe the story is good... ---------------------------------------------------- extract chapter 5: Name: -Xiao Luo = MC -Zhao Mengqi = Ex girlfriend -Huahaifeng + Hua Haifeng + Huahai Feng + Huahai Summit + Hua Shao = Young master and new boyfriend of Zhao Mengqi) Situation: Young master taunt MC and MC kick Young master... ------------------------------------------------------- Zhao Mengqi was completely on the spot, staring at the eyes, incredulously looking at Xiao Luo who had murderous aura, how can he not believe that huahai summit was kicked by Xiao Luo for a meter away. "Hey, congratulation to the host for getting 50 points!" system hint sounds. "Fifty o'clock ? How come there will be fifty?" Xiao Luo looked around and found out that there were fout security guards at the gate and saw what happened here. Soon, four security guard ran up. "Hua shao!" The four people together with Zhao Mengqi of came back to his sense and raised Hua Haifeng together. Hua Haifeng was furious, pointing to Xiao Luo and yelling:"Hit, give me a fight, I want him to leave the door of Huahai!" The four security guard dare to defy, and then say that this is an opportunity for meritotious performence. It is impossible to say that because of the lessons for Hua Haifeng, a person has since swept away.Although they saw the power of Xiao Luo, they pulled out the black lacquered iron rod hanging auround their waist and swooped up toward Xiao Luo. How could Xiao Luo fear the security of the four gatekeepers in the district?..................
A decent story, an MC with great personality. The pace is not fast nor slow witch keep it enjoyable. I wish you continue translating this novel, and i hope you work on the quality, its unreadable right now. Machine translation, i can do it myself.
The grammar is fucking bimbo. The beginning was bearable but then the sentences didn’t even start to make sense and the pronouns were mixed up every other sentence. It’s just so bad in grammar. Plot is okay, by no update in a month.
Unreadable garbage, I can't believe someone dared to defile this novel with this auto translations bs Im sure this novel is a novel with potential but with this I can't... This is so bad
There's wayyyyyyyyyyy better translations out there, so don't give up on this guys [img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Sh*t Translation a Waist of Time To Read Makes no Sense 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡🤬🤬🤬🤬😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Unredable it's not even worth trying. You can try find berable translation on other sites thou. **. How in the hell this novel have 5 stars? only one comment giving 5 stars and most won't even give 2 stars gg webnovel.
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