Endless Adventure

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The MC is an idiot (seriously, I can't understand some of the choices he made no matter how hard I try). He's also very pathetically weak. I was looking forward to reading this but for it to be ruined by an idiotic, weak, completely average and boring MC with no redeeming qualities is very unfortunate :(

There are a lot of interesting ideas, but there are many more problems, from incoherence and plot holes to a flat MC and more, I just read the first 15 chapters but there were too many problems to continue. It’s a pity, because I think it’s a story with some potential, but it should be rewritten from the first chapter. I know that this is the author first novel, so I hope that he will takes this novel as valuable experience and try to rewrite it completely or write something new when he feels ready.

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This is a bad book gotta say there is like zero story to it so plot sucks then the mc just does nothing 90% of the time and waits for certain events.

Dropped by me at least, each chapter is just a massive filler without altering story timeline too much until the end...(in other words retelling with an OC in it).

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This is a hidden gem. Though its a Fanfic the author still explains everything that should be , explanation is part of world building... MCs wish is well considered if u want to travel diff "Reality" in peace... And im expecting that he will become the Ant King and to not kill her mother to not born prematurely which the original did and it was a foolish action which result in his imperfection... Im hoping for the birth of Ant Empire or kingdom if that happens... If u update for at least 2 chapters a day then all my accounts SS will be yours author...

Now I never really make a review. I gave the low rate due to my own personal opinion. Your doing wonderful with writing and the story. I'm just not a big fan of how the character is. I like villain characters. Pretty obvious he's a bad guy. But still don't like it. Hope you continue writing but I'm gonna stop reading.

Read the first 10 chapters Not much more to say than the author has made a story with a lot if potential. Can I even say he made it since this exact story start has been seen tons of times. But anyway, from what I read the Main Character is insufferable and the author clearly hasn't planned any of this out. I hope in the future he can take more time, possible slow his update rate to carefully plan out the future of his novel and spend more time on each chapter as it seems rushed and could be improved upon massively.

Amazing story. Hope to have longer chapters and that it will not be droped. ............................................................................... And hope he gets the body of Meruem

started good but is now **** ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss