Playing Waterbending (Avatar: Last Aibender SI)

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I just can't anymore, i tried to tough it out just in case it got better(there's not a lot of good Atl:a fanfics) but it's not so i'm giving up. The plot is nonsense and full of Plot armor because of the stupid "logical" thinking. And do not get me started on the bending, it's the most round-about and basic way of using it until the author remembers the water-tentacle arms and just sticking with it from then on. I could say more but what's the point, don't bother with this story if you're looking for quality.

It's a really entertaining book, it's good to see that there are not only Chinese translations.

It must be good, considering others you wrote. Question: is there romance? ........................,...................................................................................................

5 stars just for not being a firebender.

loved all the other ones can't wait for this one

decent book don't really like the mc all too much I'll continue reading as its pretty good

Title: "The Waterbender: A Wasted Concept Wrapped in Cliché" From the very first chapter to the twelfth, this story is nothing short of a failed experiment in mediocre world-building and tired tropes. The main character, Ryuk, is an unfathomable mess of inconsistencies that would make any reader cringe in frustration. One moment, he's a waterbender with "visions" that make him seem important, the next, he's a self-proclaimed genius acting as if he can solve every problem with just brute force and cheap logic. This kind of character development doesn't make Ryuk a hero; it makes him a walking plot hole. Character Depth? Nonexistent. You might think that a character like Ryuk, who is thrown into a brutal world filled with firebenders and tribes, would have some semblance of depth or a growth arc. But no. Ryuk is so insufferably self-righteous, so obsessed with "experience points" and gaining power, that it's hard to even pretend he has a motive beyond "getting stronger." Every time Ryuk talks about leveling up or gaining power, it's like listening to a whiny teenager trying to justify his incessant grind in a video game—except there's no depth behind it. Where’s the internal struggle? Where’s the conflict between his past life and his current one? Instead, he’s just constantly shoving his new “plans” down our throats without giving us any reason to care about his supposed growth. Dialogue and Character Interaction: Painful to Read The interactions between Ryuk, Katara, and Sokka feel like they were written by someone who has no understanding of character relationships. One moment, they’re acting like a tight-knit trio, and the next, Ryuk is treating them like disposable NPCs in his grand journey. It’s as if he’s already decided he’s the main character and everyone else is just an afterthought. The dialogue is stilted and forced, filled with long, exposition-heavy rants that make the characters sound like they’re reading from a script rather than speaking naturally. It’s one thing to have characters talk a lot, but it’s another to have them drone on in an unnatural, awkward way. The conversations between the characters lack any real chemistry or nuance. Katara and Sokka’s voices are so bland and generic that they might as well be cardboard cutouts. Every time they speak, it’s as if you can hear the author typing and trying to force the characters into preordained boxes rather than letting them breathe and develop on their own. The Plot: A Trainwreck of Predictability and Missed Opportunities The plot itself is a disaster of missed potential. The story starts with a supposed waterbending prodigy, but instead of exploring the unique aspects of his bending abilities, we’re stuck in endless monologues about how powerful Ryuk can become. The entire narrative is bogged down with generic “this is what I’m going to do” dialogue and then a lack of actual action or meaningful conflict. Ryuk’s decision to leave Katara and Sokka behind to chase after a random firebender (whose escape was barely a blip in the story) just further highlights how little stakes the narrative has. Every chapter feels like it’s setting up for something bigger, but it never delivers. We never get a reason to care about Ryuk’s quest because there’s no tension, no real character development, and certainly no meaningful obstacles. The potential for character drama, like Ryuk struggling with his emotions or making tough decisions, is all but thrown out in favor of empty action sequences that amount to little more than filler. Worldbuilding: Stale and Uninspired Let’s talk about the world. A bland, frozen wasteland with no depth. The South Pole? Just a backdrop for whatever the plot needs it to be. The Fire Nation? A vague, ominous threat that serves as a convenient excuse for Ryuk to go on his little adventure. Nothing about this world feels alive. There are no memorable locations or factions to get attached to. It’s as if the author slapped on a few basic details from the original Avatar universe and called it a day. The lack of meaningful world-building makes the entire setting feel like a hollow stage, one where Ryuk can keep grinding for experience points while nothing else in the world matters. The Bottom Line: A Draining, Unfulfilling Experience This story is like reading a self-insert fanfiction that tries way too hard to be cool and edgy. It’s full of long-winded speeches, incoherent character motivations, and a main character who seems to think he’s the smartest person in the room without giving us any reason to believe it. It’s a waste of time for anyone who enjoys well-developed characters, a compelling plot, or rich world-building. If you're looking for a story with emotional depth, sharp dialogue, or meaningful stakes, look elsewhere. This is the literary equivalent of an energy drink: quick, hollow, and ultimately pointless. Final Rating: 0/10 – You’re better off watching paint dry.

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I haven't read that much but I just know that from where the story is. It's going to be a banger. Everything I read so far has been perfect and I think this could be a really good fic

pretty good, keep up the great work

Updated frequently, chapter length is decent. The system seems to help him grow fast but not too fast. I mean Katara became a master in about a month as soon as she found a master. So he’s growing about the same pace as the characters in the show strength wise? Writing quality is good not perfect but better than most. Story development has some cringeworthy moments, wtf just happened as in that came out of left field, and then a few plot holes. It’s not bad but I’ve been reading some pretty decent and well thought out stories recently so reading a story that dropped in that type of quality can be frustrating. Not bad, could probably use a few proofreaders to fix some of the logical mistakes to eliminate those mistakes mentioned but that’s just my opinion

Al principio no iba leerla por los malos comentarios, pero no sabía lo que me perdía una serie genial que cada vez va mejorando y mejorando, tanto en las batallas como en las relaciones del mc soy muy entretenidas sobre todo me gusta que no se acorda con katara y toph, además de las técnicas que inventa son muy interesante y utiles

I’ve really been enjoying the story. I think it really goes into the world of avatar and that it’s just funny and not very serious and I enjoyed reading stories like this.