Playing Waterbending (Avatar: Last Aibender SI)

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It's a really entertaining book, it's good to see that there are not only Chinese translations.

It must be good, considering others you wrote. Question: is there romance? ........................,...................................................................................................

5 stars just for not being a firebender.

loved all the other ones can't wait for this one

I just can't anymore, i tried to tough it out just in case it got better(there's not a lot of good Atl:a fanfics) but it's not so i'm giving up. The plot is nonsense and full of Plot armor because of the stupid "logical" thinking. And do not get me started on the bending, it's the most round-about and basic way of using it until the author remembers the water-tentacle arms and just sticking with it from then on. I could say more but what's the point, don't bother with this story if you're looking for quality.

decent book don't really like the mc all too much I'll continue reading as its pretty good

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I haven't read that much but I just know that from where the story is. It's going to be a banger. Everything I read so far has been perfect and I think this could be a really good fic

pretty good, keep up the great work

Updated frequently, chapter length is decent. The system seems to help him grow fast but not too fast. I mean Katara became a master in about a month as soon as she found a master. So he’s growing about the same pace as the characters in the show strength wise? Writing quality is good not perfect but better than most. Story development has some cringeworthy moments, wtf just happened as in that came out of left field, and then a few plot holes. It’s not bad but I’ve been reading some pretty decent and well thought out stories recently so reading a story that dropped in that type of quality can be frustrating. Not bad, could probably use a few proofreaders to fix some of the logical mistakes to eliminate those mistakes mentioned but that’s just my opinion

I’ve really been enjoying the story. I think it really goes into the world of avatar and that it’s just funny and not very serious and I enjoyed reading stories like this.

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from the first chapter I was drawn in. I'm on the last chapter now. I'm looking forward to the next season.