Finding himself in an Last Airbender without an airbender around, a transmigrator waterbender goes on an adventure to stop the worst from happening to him.
I just can't anymore, i tried to tough it out just in case it got better(there's not a lot of good Atl:a fanfics) but it's not so i'm giving up.
The plot is nonsense and full of Plot armor because of the stupid "logical" thinking. And do not get me started on the bending, it's the most round-about and basic way of using it until the author remembers the water-tentacle arms and just sticking with it from then on. I could say more but what's the point, don't bother with this story if you're looking for quality.
2 months ago
24
elpepe
It's a really entertaining book, it's good to see that there are not only Chinese translations.
3 months ago
12
TinyBookDragon
5 stars just for not being a firebender.
3 months ago
9
kilgan
It must be good, considering others you wrote. Question: is there romance?
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4 months ago
9
captainfatbelly
decent book don't really like the mc all too much I'll continue reading as its pretty good
4 months ago
8
True_King_1296
loved all the other ones can't wait for this one
4 months ago
7
Jay_Slater
I haven't read that much but I just know that from where the story is. It's going to be a banger. Everything I read so far has been perfect and I think this could be a really good fic
3 months ago
4
luckky25
pretty good, keep up the great work
4 months ago
4
Naonoe
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3 months ago
3
Daoist_Viking
This by far one of the best ATLA fanfics there are out there. If you can overcome the awkward start of the book you will get to enjoy a good fanfiction where the MC uses he’s brain and where the author has put a lot of thought and creativ thinking into. Can only recommend it
9 days ago
1
omiguh
Updated frequently, chapter length is decent. The system seems to help him grow fast but not too fast. I mean Katara became a master in about a month as soon as she found a master. So he’s growing about the same pace as the characters in the show strength wise? Writing quality is good not perfect but better than most. Story development has some cringeworthy moments, wtf just happened as in that came out of left field, and then a few plot holes. It’s not bad but I’ve been reading some pretty decent and well thought out stories recently so reading a story that dropped in that type of quality can be frustrating. Not bad, could probably use a few proofreaders to fix some of the logical mistakes to eliminate those mistakes mentioned but that’s just my opinion
3 months ago
1
Ebo_Eboo
Al principio no iba leerla por los malos comentarios, pero no sabía lo que me perdía una serie genial que cada vez va mejorando y mejorando, tanto en las batallas como en las relaciones del mc soy muy entretenidas sobre todo me gusta que no se acorda con katara y toph, además de las técnicas que inventa son muy interesante y utiles
2 months ago
0
Guido_Secchiaroli
I’ve really been enjoying the story. I think it really goes into the world of avatar and that it’s just funny and not very serious and I enjoyed reading stories like this.
2 months ago
0
MasterOfLight
Really good read, story wise and good writing. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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I just can't anymore, i tried to tough it out just in case it got better(there's not a lot of good Atl:a fanfics) but it's not so i'm giving up. The plot is nonsense and full of Plot armor because of the stupid "logical" thinking. And do not get me started on the bending, it's the most round-about and basic way of using it until the author remembers the water-tentacle arms and just sticking with it from then on. I could say more but what's the point, don't bother with this story if you're looking for quality.
It's a really entertaining book, it's good to see that there are not only Chinese translations.
5 stars just for not being a firebender.
It must be good, considering others you wrote. Question: is there romance? ........................,...................................................................................................
decent book don't really like the mc all too much I'll continue reading as its pretty good
loved all the other ones can't wait for this one
I haven't read that much but I just know that from where the story is. It's going to be a banger. Everything I read so far has been perfect and I think this could be a really good fic
pretty good, keep up the great work
Reveal Spoiler
This by far one of the best ATLA fanfics there are out there. If you can overcome the awkward start of the book you will get to enjoy a good fanfiction where the MC uses he’s brain and where the author has put a lot of thought and creativ thinking into. Can only recommend it
Updated frequently, chapter length is decent. The system seems to help him grow fast but not too fast. I mean Katara became a master in about a month as soon as she found a master. So he’s growing about the same pace as the characters in the show strength wise? Writing quality is good not perfect but better than most. Story development has some cringeworthy moments, wtf just happened as in that came out of left field, and then a few plot holes. It’s not bad but I’ve been reading some pretty decent and well thought out stories recently so reading a story that dropped in that type of quality can be frustrating. Not bad, could probably use a few proofreaders to fix some of the logical mistakes to eliminate those mistakes mentioned but that’s just my opinion
Al principio no iba leerla por los malos comentarios, pero no sabía lo que me perdía una serie genial que cada vez va mejorando y mejorando, tanto en las batallas como en las relaciones del mc soy muy entretenidas sobre todo me gusta que no se acorda con katara y toph, además de las técnicas que inventa son muy interesante y utiles
I’ve really been enjoying the story. I think it really goes into the world of avatar and that it’s just funny and not very serious and I enjoyed reading stories like this.
Really good read, story wise and good writing. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]