The Blue Pearl
A desolate village in the mountains was invaded by a monster of the night. It was a creature of ash and rot that nearly devoured the entire village. But the survivors ran and hid in an ancient enigmatic temple whose confines the monster could not touch.
For a month they lived in the temple. In the days they would forage the ruins of the village for scraps and in the nights they would cower inside the cold walls of the temple. But they were still dying. One by one, two by two and sometimes even three by three. When the monster came, it was not alone. It brought something with it that was slow but could pervade the temple’s protection. A plague. And at the end of the month, after more than half of the survivors were gone, only thirty one of them remained.
But before they were all sucked within the plague, two Liaisons of Blue Pearl came.
Agents of the Greatest hero of Sharak, the greatest guild in the whole realm of Faeraq Mae. They killed the monster the next day. And then, everything went wrong.
***This story contains gory and mature scenes.***
*Book 1 of the In the Shadow of a Storm series*
Releasing 1 chapter per day.
I was captivated by the author's writing style and description of the different world. It reminded me of my fav novel. It's a different novel for sure and quality is high. I highly recommend this if you love exploring the fantasy world and want to go on an adventure with the characters (It's definitely my thing...hehe)
Okay, first of all I'm glad I came across this gem. As it's written beautifully in a mastered way with highly infused imagery of world background. Secondly as it's said the title should be compelling which it is. The author stole my attention with the three-four opening lines. The narration is dark, bleak and a bit depressing which I believe was the demand of this plotline. I must say this is a worth read for EVERYONE who wants to study for style narration and to the lovers of mysterious fantasy. Lastly the paragraphing is a bit long, please cut it a little short.
Thank you all for reading this book. Here you can share all your thoughts, first impression, critiques, brutal comments about the book. It's okay, I can take it because it'll only make me change those bits that aren't 'doing it' for the readers. Of course, I can't satisfy every reader out there but will do my best to create a great reading experience. Really excited to hear from you all...
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It was quite a refreshing story. The first chapter was beautifully done. It immediately hooks you up into the story. The way it was written was good too, it's like the words guide you to paint a picture in your head. Good luck! Continue to write more!
Right from the beginning you are given everything about the world. I don't mean information but the area itself. The home, the character's struggles and the horror show that the ML is in. Seriously thought my eyes were going to pop out when you're given that much to picture. Sucked in and living American horror story, perfect novel for this month. Halloween! Anyways, you got struggle, schemers, fakers, witch craft, betrayal, and past flames. Chills. A little slow but it gives you the WTF is going on kinda feel. Don't get me wrong it's a good thing. Especially when building up the air of mystery and race to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.
I'm seriously loving this book. Highly recommended!!!!! If you have a little patience then give this story a try. I'm so glad Elsbro didn't compromise his story to fit the webnovel standards if you know what I mean :P
Knowing it was a rewrite of an old story I was already following, I did not want to read it. Bit doing so now I know why it was done. Story is much richer now and there are enough change that it feels like a different story. As for the story itself it is unique and much different than what i have read so far. Even the characters are unique and lovable and keeps things interesting. Best of luck...
I'm here for the feel and the writing style. The rich& complicated story line is a bonus. This obviously is quite different from the ones I've read here i wn 5* for the refreshing style.
Although I was a little confused in the beginning, the story started to become clearer in the next chapters. The story is intriguing, making the reader to become addicted, wanting for more. It's a well-written novel with interesting characters. Keep up the good work!
I am quite fascinated by your story. Keep up your good work. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I'm really starting to love this story.... I am waiting for updates. The world is dark and beautiful at the same time. I guess that's what spoke to me the most. Recommend it.
Hai! I've to admit, the story stole attention even at the very first chapter. The way u describing the story is really nice in my opinion. It's really great! But there some aspect like the world backgrounds that still unclear about. But overall it's nice! Keep up with the good work, author! 😊 Btw I make a story too and it would be kind of u if u can check it out and give some reviews and stars in there too 😊 My story : https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14901475106138705
It's quite interesting. Although it's new but I am up for it. The story sounds promising and interesting so far. Waiting for more updates.... 👍❤️👍❤️👍❤️
The novel is written very well, the creativity and word usage are superb. How the author describes the world well and is very detailed from characters to the current state, it enables one to picture it out clearly. FOR FANTASY readers out there, please try it out and it won't disappoint. Good Job! My only feedback is how slow it was from the start, but I noticed that after a few chapters, it has already improved. I prefer a really fast-paced story, but that's just me. To: ElsbroSparka Sorry for redoing the review. I wasn't finished yet earlier and I got a call from work. I pressed on post by accident.
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