Asher a young prodigy that loves anime die in the experiment of his father to make an artificial god and got the opportunity to travel to the ninja world as Sasuke Uchiha
Its interesting but sooo much info and sooo little story...change this....make MC op....i dont really know what the suggest or ask as this is sasuke...I always thought he was a privileged cunt...
so I guess make him a less of a cunt,,,,,,OP MC...one man army..[this is quite literally sasuke and his ancestors style,,,,they do **** by themselves whilst naruto and his ancestor gets the help from others]...world travel no doubt cause otherwise it would be boring..I suggest bleach or highschool dxd or fairytail a few hundred years before cannon [mostly bleach]...add some romance and fluff..also build the damn romance..no sad ****...make MC leave village [once again its his style]..make him learn snake sage....if harem keep it small...bash characters..its fun...also **** sakura..listen those who like her...like her,,,but we all know that she was useless and a bit mental....loved the guy that literally tired to kill her...ignored the guy that was always there,,,,though let it be known that I support narn x hina....
Anyway goodluck and goodshow
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Its interesting but sooo much info and sooo little story...change this....make MC op....i dont really know what the suggest or ask as this is sasuke...I always thought he was a privileged cunt... so I guess make him a less of a cunt,,,,,,OP MC...one man army..[this is quite literally sasuke and his ancestors style,,,,they do **** by themselves whilst naruto and his ancestor gets the help from others]...world travel no doubt cause otherwise it would be boring..I suggest bleach or highschool dxd or fairytail a few hundred years before cannon [mostly bleach]...add some romance and fluff..also build the damn romance..no sad ****...make MC leave village [once again its his style]..make him learn snake sage....if harem keep it small...bash characters..its fun...also **** sakura..listen those who like her...like her,,,but we all know that she was useless and a bit mental....loved the guy that literally tired to kill her...ignored the guy that was always there,,,,though let it be known that I support narn x hina.... Anyway goodluck and goodshow
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