well, I think it's a very well made story, but it has small errors of writing, nothing much, it can gets better easily. I'm liking it pretty much, and I hope you'll keep updating it until finished. If you can, remember to put the "Apex Wildcat" or something's status board, tou just said it's name and what happened to him. Hope for your sucess with this novel! xD
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Connavarrs
so is this going to be a complete copy of Virtual World: Conquering the World or are you the original author ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
6 years ago
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DaNepz
Very good start.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
well, I think it's a very well made story, but it has small errors of writing, nothing much, it can gets better easily. I'm liking it pretty much, and I hope you'll keep updating it until finished. If you can, remember to put the "Apex Wildcat" or something's status board, tou just said it's name and what happened to him. Hope for your sucess with this novel! xD
so is this going to be a complete copy of Virtual World: Conquering the World or are you the original author ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Very good start.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐