A Magical Destination

You better keep writing this book or else I’m gonna have to dust off my guns. Then have you and them meet at your door. I’ll be watching you. 👁👁👁👁👁👁 Don’t make me use my extra cash to track you down. (J.K. 👅👅👅👅👅👅 OR AM I *dun**duuuun* duuuuuuuun* 👹👹👹

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Good story, hope you continue writing it! Nothing else to say........... Damn the 140 characters limit, it's spoiling the review section.

An excellent novel... Just remember that child **** will get the novel deleted so don't go into that area.. 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😅🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏

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Honest Review Wow! Talk about finding a hidden gem! The Good: Writing quality is outstanding! Hard to believe this is the author's first novel! The system is easy to understand and giving it hard limits like that adds to the amount of creativity needed to bring out the MCs power. The amount of details added to... everything... really helps keep the story alive, just be careful about going overboard with the descriptions sometimes. The Bad: Really hard to find the bad in this one, maybe just the chapters are a little shorter than expected causing immersion to break. I personally don't like that everything seems to go the MCs way, but I also understand that it was designed that way. The Neutral: Same as before, not a fan of everything going the MCs way, so I am not going to take off for that. Also wish the chapters were a tad longer, I guess I just consider about 1500 words a minimum.

How I stumped into this amazing gem is something I’ve been looking for for ages the writing is amazing and I think this book has a lot of potential keep it up👌

Harem ftw👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Im crying at how good this book is it’s simple exciting amazing and everything in between the book Captivates you to read so much thx don’t drop

I like everything about this novel except for Laura and the queen. I just don't like how clingy she is and the queen is ok for now but I just don't like Laura she's so annoying. I really REALLY hope that Laura doesn't become tge main female lead

Story seems very interesting so far. So far there are quite a few blah blah moments where the author repeatedly beats home the same point making it easy to skip nearly an entire chapter and not miss anything. The interaction between characters seems to be missing a little as the MC is an old wise guy(read past 3chapters). Other than those issues I look forward to seeing what comes next.

this novel is for those high-class readers writed by a godly autor who claime beeing the first work for him LIKE HELL THAT WOLD BE RIGHT you know your skills is good. really good but the only probleme i can find is your over detailed descreption

Great Story. Keep up with the great work :):):):) ................................................................................... .

THE TRANSLLATION IS EXCELLENT(WRITING QUALITY GREAT), STORY DEVELOPMENT IS DEEP AND PROFOUND,SAME FOR CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT AND WORLD BACKGROUND. STABILITY UPDATES ARE A PROBLEM. WILL BE WILLING TO GIFT STORY MORE IF CHAPTER UPDATES ARE INCREASED TO 2 A DAY. HAVE ALREADY GIFTED STORY OVER 300 COINS.