This a basically a story of a guy who hates the stupid decision that people make or are made for them so he takes it in to his own hands to fix other people problems while getting benefits of his own. Hope you guys enjoy the story like I do. ^^
5 years ago
5
A_TastyDonut
Let's start with writing quality. I can see the type of comedy and self awareness your going for and I absolutely love it. It plays in a similar fashion to konosuba which is a really funny story. I can't say much about the update stability since it's only 13 chapters in but waiting isn't really an issue for me. The story is fast paced and is executed relatively well. The character descriptions are very detailed, which I like. World background is very descriptive but can be a little confusing at times. Overall great comedic story and a good quick read if you like this type of genre and story.
5 years ago
5
KenceRussel
The story is good and has a good start. I hope the author will continue doing the best for the story. Good luck in improving the quality of your novel
5 years ago
4
ahmed_waleed_1200
Thanks for your hard work so keep up and don't drop this story and hope to read more chapters.
Waiting for him to become more powerful and become a true god so keep up and don't drop this story.
Really y good work and like it very much so hope you post more chapters.
5 years ago
3
Lucas_Yee
It's an interesting concept of reincarnating and slowly getting stronger. The grammar isn't bad, although in some parts it's a little hard to understand.
5 years ago
2
Vaibhav_Kumar_0372
Great read,....................... great read............... great read.................. great read................... great read..........
4 years ago
1
Taoist_Ouroboros
i love marvel and dc so i understand the world and the things in them but i have never seen heros so am i going to lose out on some things ? just asking i love the story, more please!
This is a great story so far if you're looking for a fast paced story, a MC that goes for any opportunity he can take, great character development, a little confusing but understandable background, little to no grammatical errors, and quite a bit of research that goes into this book. Overall, a great Marvel fanfiction.
5 years ago
1
NotUse
Writing Quality
-Unique
-Creative
-The use of uncommon descriptive words gives a pinch of interest to the reader.
Update
-Five stars cause why not?
Character Development
-MC is perfect and lovable.
-Characters are described vividly
Story development
-The pace is not slow nor fast, it's perfect and unique
World background
-It was described vividly.
-It keeps me captivated and motivated to yearn for more chapters.
Overall:
Keep up the goodwork!
5 years ago
1
Morenikejitemi
This story is very interesting, you did a great job author, the plotting of the story is pretty unique and the characters are well described, keep up the good job author.
5 years ago
1
Eternal_Demon
The nice novel, I really love the way the author describes the story that's why I gave 5 stars.
1234 rock on the dance floor...damn 140 words required.
5 years ago
1
MistofOblivion
This is super awesome novel, Mc can copy other's abilities. It has a mixture of different things like SAO. Mc is not a sidekick of anyone and trying to develop the whole world.
5 years ago
1
VladimierDraculTem
It's fantastic I highly recommend it 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌.....................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This a basically a story of a guy who hates the stupid decision that people make or are made for them so he takes it in to his own hands to fix other people problems while getting benefits of his own. Hope you guys enjoy the story like I do. ^^
Let's start with writing quality. I can see the type of comedy and self awareness your going for and I absolutely love it. It plays in a similar fashion to konosuba which is a really funny story. I can't say much about the update stability since it's only 13 chapters in but waiting isn't really an issue for me. The story is fast paced and is executed relatively well. The character descriptions are very detailed, which I like. World background is very descriptive but can be a little confusing at times. Overall great comedic story and a good quick read if you like this type of genre and story.
The story is good and has a good start. I hope the author will continue doing the best for the story. Good luck in improving the quality of your novel
Thanks for your hard work so keep up and don't drop this story and hope to read more chapters. Waiting for him to become more powerful and become a true god so keep up and don't drop this story. Really y good work and like it very much so hope you post more chapters.
It's an interesting concept of reincarnating and slowly getting stronger. The grammar isn't bad, although in some parts it's a little hard to understand.
Great read,....................... great read............... great read.................. great read................... great read..........
i love marvel and dc so i understand the world and the things in them but i have never seen heros so am i going to lose out on some things ? just asking i love the story, more please!
Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!Please update!
This is a great story so far if you're looking for a fast paced story, a MC that goes for any opportunity he can take, great character development, a little confusing but understandable background, little to no grammatical errors, and quite a bit of research that goes into this book. Overall, a great Marvel fanfiction.
Writing Quality -Unique -Creative -The use of uncommon descriptive words gives a pinch of interest to the reader. Update -Five stars cause why not? Character Development -MC is perfect and lovable. -Characters are described vividly Story development -The pace is not slow nor fast, it's perfect and unique World background -It was described vividly. -It keeps me captivated and motivated to yearn for more chapters. Overall: Keep up the goodwork!
This story is very interesting, you did a great job author, the plotting of the story is pretty unique and the characters are well described, keep up the good job author.
The nice novel, I really love the way the author describes the story that's why I gave 5 stars. 1234 rock on the dance floor...damn 140 words required.
This is super awesome novel, Mc can copy other's abilities. It has a mixture of different things like SAO. Mc is not a sidekick of anyone and trying to develop the whole world.
It's fantastic I highly recommend it 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌.....................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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