Evolution God

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A man of one word. Nice! Me likey! Just need more consistent updates and by that, I mean every single day. I also like the above-average fast pace of the story.

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Rating: 3.0 After reading through all of the chapters the author has written so far, I find that the writing is unoriginal and tends to rely on cliché to boost its plot development. Not much is explained about the world the mc is transported too as of yet and my scoring of the world background aspect of this review reflects that. The character development of the mc is practically nonexistent. We get the feeling that the mc should be a generally good guy (which is reflected in some of the author’s comments at the end of one of the chapters) but, if this were the case, then I don’t necessarily think that a good person would massacre thousands of intelligent beings with little remorse. Then again power does change people so I may be wrong. Just a side note, I do generally prefer evil characters in the novels that I read. It’s just when people say they are going to go one direction with a character, and suddenly (perhaps without knowing) deviate from that path they had specified before that it becomes slightly... amusing? I guess? Whenever a serious action novel makes me amused or laugh out loud in absurdity (not during comedic interlude) it is usually a bad sign. Anyway, moving on. Second big thing. Your novel is moving WAY TOO FAST. If you want to see longevity in your novel then you really want to slow your roll just a little bit. I will admit that I find this style of writing entertaining. For a short while that is. I know from first had experience how boring this type of linear progression through a system can be, especially when I’ve seen all the same tropes and clichés that arise with eastern system novels an uncountable number of times. So... slow it down. Throw in some innovative and original ideas in your novel every 5-10 chapters or so to keep your novel fresh and new instead of reusing the same clichés and overused ideas that many other novels use. You do have an interesting take on the standard eastern system, I will admit that. That, if nothing else feels innovative and fresh. Update frequency is fantastic so great job on that. However, don’t burn yourself out from writing to much as that can be the worst to recover from. Separate yourself from the pack! Use innovative and fresh ideas to spice up your novel and you could sore into fame on this site! Farewell :)

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really good but it's need more words and don't turn him human seriously why dragon in the first place if he gonna become human again .................

I'm just wondering if the Arthur dropped this because it's been a while since it last got updated. Arthur if you see this please reply its one of the best novel I like

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Great story. I love the pace and contrary to what I have seen in other reviews, I don't think the story is repetitive. And honestly, something that greatly surprised me is that even if I usually hate deus ex machina ti save the mc's life, when there was one in this story I really felt like it was fine and I was happy to know that the mc actually needed something likr that to survive, which remembers the reader that although he is always getting stronger, there are still people stronger than him.

Great story very cool neresting I like how he can combine his skills to create new ones and of course I really enjoy the descriptions of his skills.when will he meet back up with that adventureing healinging chick?