I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEE THIIIIIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSS OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE DOOOOOOONNNNNTTTTTT DRROOOOOOOOOOOPPP
5 years ago
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windlord
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5 years ago
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GodOfAdventure
Wow. This is very nice to read. I like your writing style author. Hope you continue this.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
5 years ago
2
Ansiliden
Keep going! Ive seen some percy jackson fan fics on here before and this is one of the best so far. Dont make him really OP at the start though. I dont know about the other element control though or maybe play it off as a recessive gene. And make it so the fates and hestia cant see through him anymore since zeus will smite him anyway better get that lightning control up quick though
Mooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeee Donโt you dare drop I Will find you and I will make you suffer. You hear me I said DONโT DROP. ๏ฟผ
5 years ago
1
SucktiferDSucky
Yo Mr. Author sorry but I will not read ur book I wish not to offend u but due to u only needing one more review to stars which makes it so that people read ur book I will give you this don't drop man I believe you can do this with all the people lovin ur book
2 years ago
0
Emma_Scheele_7937
I love this so muchโค Please continue to write this story๐โโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEE THIIIIIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSS OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE DOOOOOOONNNNNTTTTTT DRROOOOOOOOOOOPPP
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Wow. This is very nice to read. I like your writing style author. Hope you continue this.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Keep going! Ive seen some percy jackson fan fics on here before and this is one of the best so far. Dont make him really OP at the start though. I dont know about the other element control though or maybe play it off as a recessive gene. And make it so the fates and hestia cant see through him anymore since zeus will smite him anyway better get that lightning control up quick though
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Mooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeee Donโt you dare drop I Will find you and I will make you suffer. You hear me I said DONโT DROP. ๏ฟผ
Yo Mr. Author sorry but I will not read ur book I wish not to offend u but due to u only needing one more review to stars which makes it so that people read ur book I will give you this don't drop man I believe you can do this with all the people lovin ur book
I love this so muchโค Please continue to write this story๐โโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ
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