Warhammer: Dark Knights
Author: DaRkAGL
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Our protagonist is reincarnated as a noble's offspring, with his family currently holding the title of Duke. Just as Richard is thinking that he can finally live a carefree life, he discovers that he's actually the youngest child.
"Even as the youngest, I should at least get the title of Viscount, right? If not, I could just work for my eldest brother. At the very least, the work shouldn't be too hard, so my life should be pretty smooth."
Of course, it would be better if our protagonist didn't look behind him and see the twelve-leg spider that staring at him.
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You need to improve on your spellings and grammar I have a suggestion you can use if you're serious about improving. Use chatgpt to fine tune your drafts and read on what it has improved on then you the author rewrite it to make it more human, but if you just post chatgpt work without refining it, it will become inhumane to read and you will be getting 1 stars from then on.
Dude, your killing you own ff by writing it in a second perspective, write it either in a 1st or 3rd POV if you want it to reach more people
This is like a hidden gem... Its a pretty good story. However, the writing could use some improvement. My brother, try using ChatGPT or any other ai tool to help you out. Anyways, don't drop! Keep going! I like it!
Its a good 40k fanfic and if like me you need your space marine fix this story will accommodate ya
the lore and the background of the story is great well thought of my only critic is his personality/character or lack of character like his been tried for a couple of years and has died multiple times yet no change in personality or trauma and he is the chapter master give him a bit of aura and boldness and certainty to his mission for the EMPEROR OF MAN that's all