perfect.
kaguya and hinata = harem.
.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
5 years ago
5
Syahrul_Azhar
No offense, but i like to tell you what in my mind, for a naruto fan like me, i have a bad impression toward naruto's personality that you make especially when naruto killed the bandits and he lost the charm that the original naruto have, and much more i dislike about this novel, you make a good story but you make a critical mistake about his personality, he still helping people wich is what originally naruto would do, but his personality gave me a bad impression somehow?l🤔
Just sharing opinion no grudge feeling 😏👍👍😁😊😊
5 years ago
4
NotTester95
It’s a really good novel with funny moments and stuff, giving me a phew laughs, but I’m not adding any spoilers since I hate them and reading it without any spoilers is much better.
this is a good story and I enjoy reading it A LOT but I think that it's a bit sad that this book doesn't have anymore chapters with is a downside BUT it was good I liked the story and the "op naruto" character so good job.
3 years ago
0
The_3_Amegos
great book
........................................
......................,...................
...........................................
4 years ago
0
kraszero5727
мне понравилось=)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
perfect. kaguya and hinata = harem. .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
No offense, but i like to tell you what in my mind, for a naruto fan like me, i have a bad impression toward naruto's personality that you make especially when naruto killed the bandits and he lost the charm that the original naruto have, and much more i dislike about this novel, you make a good story but you make a critical mistake about his personality, he still helping people wich is what originally naruto would do, but his personality gave me a bad impression somehow?l🤔 Just sharing opinion no grudge feeling 😏👍👍😁😊😊
It’s a really good novel with funny moments and stuff, giving me a phew laughs, but I’m not adding any spoilers since I hate them and reading it without any spoilers is much better.
Where is the sequel man you neeed it so bad
Trash trash Trash trash Trash trash Trash trashTrash trash Trash trashTrash trash Trash trash Trash trash Trash trashTrash trash Trash trashTrash trash Trash trash Trash trash Trash trashTrash trash Trash trash
this is a good story and I enjoy reading it A LOT but I think that it's a bit sad that this book doesn't have anymore chapters with is a downside BUT it was good I liked the story and the "op naruto" character so good job.
great book ........................................ ......................,................... ...........................................
мне понравилось=)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp
its good keep up the good work.................................................................................... also try to make the chaps longer
Really wished you would make more chapters it was so good! Anyways good job keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!