A more logical story about a fellow and somewhat selfish reincarnator, in (hopefully) multiple worlds. The story won't focus on fighting and domination. Maybe some romantic aspect will be added later, without adult scenes.
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(I don't own any of the anime or comic story in which my character travels; I don't own cover picture; if you have a Problem with the Picture I can remove it)
You must understand, that storyline is not 100% the same. If you don't like it, you can go and read mangas or watch animes.
It's my 1st work. So i know, that i still have a room for improvement and i don't want to overestimate myself. I really need objective reviews.
It's freaking amazing. Like yes. Like oh yes. I love it so much, it is the best fan fic I've ever read. Amazing. Please don't stop writing this or continue depending on what you are doing.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I think the story has potential. It going ok so far... ... ... ... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... ... .... ... .... ... ... ..
It is a very interesting story. I like how the characters development and the flow of the story. It is not force but it still need some detail insertion like timeskip where never mention surprising the readers the time gap between events. For the rest, more polish on the smoother grammar and symbols. Good job and good luck for more development of your story.😊😊😊