X-Force: Beyond Omega

Author here with the usual 5 stars. Well, it's harem, no ntr, no yuri. Got a question feel free to ask. And let me know if there are any typos. Finally, have a bit of patience. The story has just began. You'll get your answers.

oh my God! what an amazing novel like seriously this one just made it into my top three of all time, I'm a huge fanfic nerd but I don't have anything to complain about I really enjoy OP characters so keep it rocking my friend and give me more more more. I can't wait keep up the hard work my friend God bless you.

Writing quality is perfect. I really do like how it goes. MC is a smart one not a naive idiot like most of the MCU fictions. He has 3 step process for ppl who like to stir trouble and i loved it. Not a psychopaths killing left and right. Good work author-san best of luck.

The story is good and has potential, but from the 15 chapters that the novel have, 7 chapters are just him dating Jean or doing thing with her. I know the synopsis said that the novel will have harem, but with only Jean we already have just half of the plot, what will happen when he really have a harem? We will have 1 plot chapter and 10 chapters of him dating and interacting with the girls? Not even mentioning that this Jean is just an OC character with her powers and appearance, as her personality has nothing related to the real Jean Gray...

this is really good, but it's got some stupid stuff from the comics i never liked. how can a tech stop the activation of a gene that gives powers that like saying ur phone can turn ur hair blue by pressing a button. it always made me roll my eyes when the government was able to stop mutants as powerful as Magneto with little effort. then again, i also never like that their was so many powerful mutants. If mutants are so rare as to be 1 in 1 million people but also 1 in 1million are alpha and 1 in 1 billion an omega then thier should be very few powerful alpha and VERY few omega.

Finally, I don’t know why people don’t use abilties like All For One more often. Gonna let this marinate for a while though.

Tanto potencial indo para o lixo ele tem o poder do All For One mas não usa que lixo pode pegar os poder de todos os mutantes mas não faz e que nem uma cópia ---- kkkkkk cada capítulo e uma agonia de ler vendo o protagonista tão lixo e pq ele tem meta-conhecimento das HQs dos mangas e dos filmes mas mesmo assim AFF decepções

is he a hero, villain or anti hero..........................................................................................................................

Muy buena historia Bro 👍 No puedo esperar para leer el próximo capítulo ...................................................................

I know your greatness, good grammar, nice plot, im happy for this new story. So don't drop it please. Like pretty please!

it's a marvel harem fanfiction with no Yuri so that's great . the story progression is good not too fast nor slow. the MC has great interaction with the rest of the cast with no hollow bonds. overall great work one of my favorites

I wish you add Natasha And Gwen ghost spider And Wanda To mc harem Also you must expanded the plot how about mc make adventure through space join ravagers and find new planet for mutated to teleport them there …….and teleport any new one Also. The ten rings mc should get them as his weapon

Its a nice blend from existing well-known storylines to tell a new story. Interesting character development on the known characters

Solid fanfic, nuff said.

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