Highschool DXD: the harbinger

read it...the books awesome... now heres my opinion... so far it seems that the MC is OP..as he has killed dragons so I'd assume he is at least mid tier ultimate class and so keep it like that make him stronger than anyone in his generation......The MC is OP and its pretty cool ...dont make him join any peerage or neuter him..make him a one man army as his powers are not really team acceptable, plus who doesnt love a one man army...And dont make any BS moments where MC is beaten by someone weaker because he was distracted as the MC has plenty of experience from years of fighting. Dont make MC think with his Dick and immediately fall in love with any of the main cast directly..atleast build the relationship.if harem max 5.... ** ..add some character bash...ie: issei-look I like him as a MC but he really is a ****ty MC that insults women and is really stupid..... either way this is my suggestion..good show and good luck

BOOO000. MC hates devils but still trains his traitor slave cousin. I mean WTF? If you hate someone with passion you don't make concessions. Unless he would try to somehow redeem her/save her then I could understand this. But for now you build mc to hate devils but he still somehow tolerates his cousin who he should feel betrayed him. Afterall you wrote the character this why but he doesn't act like it.

great , far greater than i expected and like it more and more than before continue buddy i will add another review in future , i want mc to be good bow that he solved his mental problems

The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. Even though I spent a stone spirit I still hope you carry on your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.

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It is good and all but it takes to long for a chapter to be released and but it is still a good one and please it like it has been (hiatus)

tbh i rated 5 star beecause like op mc who world build or kingdom build cant wait to see where it goes :)

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Really enjoying the story so far, the writing style is nice and you keep a good flow through the chapters. So yeah, keep up the good work!! 😊

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