Mechanical Mage
What happens when an engineer from Earth learned magic on another world?
A Mechanical Mage!
Elvin found himself reincarnated to a human body on another world when he was trying to save a beggar from thugs.
That began his journey to the land of Ashenborn as Levi and make things that the people of the land has never seen.
Steam engine? Guns? Artillery? Cars? Planes?
Eventually, he will be cursed by somebody who he was destined to kill. His body will disappear part by part and it will only stop if he can find and kill the one who put the curse before his whole body totally disappear.
Can Levi kill him?
Or...
Would he be still intact before he can kill the one who put the curse?
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Novels with MC that use Earthen knowledge in another world is a premise I love. I will be tuning in for sure, each week and I hope it pans out. Now there are a few issues, the biggest being the MC. I trap I see you(the author) falling into is making the MC op. That leads to no character growth and so forth.
I will say first, The beginning could have been more dramatic, how you started. But overall It was okay, enjoyable. There are some mistakes in writing If you revise those carefully, You will able to improve pretty much good. The story development and world background is up to my expectation. In these few chapters, you have managed it cool. So at the last, I will say it's okay, there are some areas to improve. Eventually, you will get better and hope later you will able to fill up those missing charms.
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I am the writer so I rated it 5 stars although I know that it's not perfect. Enjoy reading it and feel free to make a constructive critism or just comment anything you want about this novel. Thanks!
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I personally liked the story and as a new writer myself, I think there were a few things here and there that could be a source of inspiration for myself. I believe this novel to have good potential and the idea is pretty good. Come on, who doesn't dream of something like this?
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