Gin Cinder's life has lost its luster it had in his youth. Depression kicking in he decides to end it all only to fail. Under a bridge, broken, he would meet an odd individual that would force on him an alternative future.(Kinda cliche, I know)
Great idea that i have never seen in this form, the whole book is great so far, a bit of information is missing but overall it doesn't matter to the story
5 years ago
6
desdodo
I deeply enjoy the story, it is extremely strange and creative. The tone and grammar used are advanced and entertaining. By far the best part however is the yandere content. As a genre, there isn't as much as I would like so to see a yandere story that's well written with interesting developments, and it also is extremely different and in no way unoriginal is fantastic. The only negative point is the release schedule. Though 4-3 days per chapter is a lot better than many novels, especially for the length of these chapters. I would like to unreasonably demand a chapter a day. Or better yet, 10 chapters a day! Still, I recommend this novel if you want something interesting, unique, or with Yandere characters.
5 years ago
5
steelz
I can't say much other than the fact I like yandere. Despite that the novel is enjoyable as a whole but sometimes it just drops too much system info at once which I often end up ignoring.
5 years ago
3
Alex1911
Reveal Spoiler
5 years ago
2
GermanicSoul
This story have a interesting developmen, the first chapter i think 'what is this' bug after the first chapter the story have a interesting idea. totally recommended
5 years ago
2
Bubba69Hutep
very nice from siria --- just hope the mc dont stay a 40 years old virgim for to long
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5 years ago
1
ken_ringdomstory
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
5 years ago
1
TheWolfWhoCriedBoy
It is really unique and I haven’t seen/read anything else like it. This way of fantasy is different from the standard most novels use. All in all, read it!
5 years ago
1
KlyntarSupremacy
I love spiders so this caught my curiosity but as I read it had my full attention. The companions that join our MC are very interesting and have unique abilities. Its worth a read and can have you hooked wish It updated more tho because I be craving for it so bad sometimes.
5 years ago
1
smyle_psychopath
Great novel 😋😍🤩😍😍🤩😍😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩🥰🤩🤩🤩😍🥰😍😍🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰😜😍😍😍🤩😍😍🤩🤩😍😍🤩😍🤩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤣😍🤣🤣😍😍😍🤩😍😍🤩🤩😍😍😍🤩😍💓💓💓💕💓💕💕💕💕💕💕💓💓💓💕💕💕💓💕💕💕💕💕💓💓💕💕💓🤩🤩😍😍🤩😍🤩🤩😍🤩🤩🤩
5 years ago
1
Kajnagyip
A good story, not the best, but certainly better than the majority of things I have seen in this site.
Author doesn’t make many physical descriptions(more than ten chapters in and I don’t know how the MC looks like) but I like it more than overly long and pretentious descriptions, overall It’s a nice story that you can have fun reading without cringing every two phrases
5 years ago
1
Sarenyia
Really good story and characters. Just wish it had more updates.
The forshadowing is done really well and makes me want to keep reading.
The whole system is well done and pretty different from other novels.
5 years ago
1
rafa101
I'm really enjoying this novel id love for the author to update more frequently since the some chapters are rather short but it is an enjoyable read and i would love to continue reading until the story ends. Serious props to the author!
5 years ago
1
Sarenyia
Overall it's a great story, early on the writing seemed rushed and hard to keep track of but after the first few chapters it got much better.
Love this story and can't wait to read it as more chapters come out!
5 years ago
1
Krizantem
To tell you the truth, I haven't read much. But I have certain thoughts about the specific errors I noticed from the first chapters, as well as how difficult it is to write a book on "System"
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As an author, you probably have no experience writing books on issues that get the theme of the system. It's not a problem, but when I think about the subject of the book, the book becomes complicated because the beginning is too fast and does not match your writing experience.
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Extremely detailed system panels. In system-using books, it is normal to use "Status Screen". I use it myself too. However, the technique used as a classic in system books is to gradually develop the system. You, as a writer, made the status panel overly-detailed from the start. This just scares new readers that not accustomed to your book from the start. That makes a lot of people pass without reading.
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"System" and "Summoner" are better to choose a simple topic and move from this topic simply as a beginning when the system starts writing the book. The summoning base is a subject that can be written as a subject of its own in the book. When both the system and the summoner are combined, the issue gets more complicated and a difficult situation is in the hands of an inexperienced writer.
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I think you will develop as you write more - overall thank you for hard work
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Oh, thank you.
Great idea that i have never seen in this form, the whole book is great so far, a bit of information is missing but overall it doesn't matter to the story
I deeply enjoy the story, it is extremely strange and creative. The tone and grammar used are advanced and entertaining. By far the best part however is the yandere content. As a genre, there isn't as much as I would like so to see a yandere story that's well written with interesting developments, and it also is extremely different and in no way unoriginal is fantastic. The only negative point is the release schedule. Though 4-3 days per chapter is a lot better than many novels, especially for the length of these chapters. I would like to unreasonably demand a chapter a day. Or better yet, 10 chapters a day! Still, I recommend this novel if you want something interesting, unique, or with Yandere characters.
I can't say much other than the fact I like yandere. Despite that the novel is enjoyable as a whole but sometimes it just drops too much system info at once which I often end up ignoring.
Reveal Spoiler
This story have a interesting developmen, the first chapter i think 'what is this' bug after the first chapter the story have a interesting idea. totally recommended
very nice from siria --- just hope the mc dont stay a 40 years old virgim for to long ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssVssssssIsssssssRsssssssssGssssssIssssssssM
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
It is really unique and I haven’t seen/read anything else like it. This way of fantasy is different from the standard most novels use. All in all, read it!
I love spiders so this caught my curiosity but as I read it had my full attention. The companions that join our MC are very interesting and have unique abilities. Its worth a read and can have you hooked wish It updated more tho because I be craving for it so bad sometimes.
Great novel 😋😍🤩😍😍🤩😍😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩🥰🤩🤩🤩😍🥰😍😍🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰😜😍😍😍🤩😍😍🤩🤩😍😍🤩😍🤩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤣😍🤣🤣😍😍😍🤩😍😍🤩🤩😍😍😍🤩😍💓💓💓💕💓💕💕💕💕💕💕💓💓💓💕💕💕💓💕💕💕💕💕💓💓💕💕💓🤩🤩😍😍🤩😍🤩🤩😍🤩🤩🤩
A good story, not the best, but certainly better than the majority of things I have seen in this site. Author doesn’t make many physical descriptions(more than ten chapters in and I don’t know how the MC looks like) but I like it more than overly long and pretentious descriptions, overall It’s a nice story that you can have fun reading without cringing every two phrases
Really good story and characters. Just wish it had more updates. The forshadowing is done really well and makes me want to keep reading. The whole system is well done and pretty different from other novels.
I'm really enjoying this novel id love for the author to update more frequently since the some chapters are rather short but it is an enjoyable read and i would love to continue reading until the story ends. Serious props to the author!
Overall it's a great story, early on the writing seemed rushed and hard to keep track of but after the first few chapters it got much better. Love this story and can't wait to read it as more chapters come out!
To tell you the truth, I haven't read much. But I have certain thoughts about the specific errors I noticed from the first chapters, as well as how difficult it is to write a book on "System" - 1 - - As an author, you probably have no experience writing books on issues that get the theme of the system. It's not a problem, but when I think about the subject of the book, the book becomes complicated because the beginning is too fast and does not match your writing experience. - 2- - Extremely detailed system panels. In system-using books, it is normal to use "Status Screen". I use it myself too. However, the technique used as a classic in system books is to gradually develop the system. You, as a writer, made the status panel overly-detailed from the start. This just scares new readers that not accustomed to your book from the start. That makes a lot of people pass without reading. - 3- - "System" and "Summoner" are better to choose a simple topic and move from this topic simply as a beginning when the system starts writing the book. The summoning base is a subject that can be written as a subject of its own in the book. When both the system and the summoner are combined, the issue gets more complicated and a difficult situation is in the hands of an inexperienced writer. - 4- - End- I think you will develop as you write more - overall thank you for hard work - Oh, thank you.