Reincarnated in DXD(rewrite)

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This is unreadable, it feels like you're in a space rocket with speeds greater than the speed of light and trying to read a static book while you're spinning around it hahaha [google translator]

what are the wishes? ...................

This story depending on how it progresses has the potential to be one of the best in the DxD category on here keep it up.

decently written story, it seems to use ai a little but not enough to be annoying.

Volume 2 is so bad it's beyond recovery. .

The main character seems interesting but a pushover to his parents and has no free will also the time skips are all over the place and there was not really that much background. However good idea of a story just hoping to get flash backs on his projects he did. But really the main character seems like a puppet of his parents and has no say or opinion. I was hoping for some long term building or personality changed in the time skip

I think it’s pretty good, took the story in a way I don’t think I have seen

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Es algo inconsistente el progreso de la tecnología, pero creo que el autor trata de justificar con el 2 y 3 deseo pero se ve muy acelerado toda la historia. Se siente como si el IQ mundial baja unas líneas para no cuestionar nada.