FLAMING BLOOD DEMON GOD DOULUO

Don't give up on creating work because it's quiet doesn't mean that no one is reading but it's quiet because there are many who read but are embarrassed to admit that they keep their spirit bro

A bit of flawed logic at the start and a few grammar errors but overall quite a good story........ Would recommend...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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How do I rate less than a star for writeing quality... It's not edited at all Not English even remotely Seems to use dogs as a curse word when dogs as we all know are good animals the best animals besides birbs and cats If someone is a bad person there are many words to use dogs isn't even remotely one of them Also edit get something or so eons to edit your work before you post ... I can't even understand 3/4 of each sentence