After a careless accident, Ahanlem was unwittingly transported back to ancient Kangleipak and got tangled in a mess of ghostly horrors, royal disputes and unexpected romantic affairs.
Will Ahanlem find a way to return back to her time? Or will she decide to stay back for the people she comes to love?

Ahanlem

ROMANCE

ADVENTURE

MYSTERY

HISTORICAL

UNDEAD

CROSSDRESSING

The title page is very beautiful. The first proposals of the introduction also give rise to the picture of the idyll of an ordinary working day at the university. Everything is peaceful, quiet and suddenly ... the fall is not realistic, an unknown person (who is he?) Went to the cliff (motive? Why?). Somehow, everything is incomprehensible. But the author describes the world simply, he succeeds easily, not everyone succeeds from the first attempt to clearly and simply show the world in which events occur.

"Twilight Gold" is somewhat annoying to hear, I can not imagine this color? But wait, have I heard that somewhere? Does it seem the author has Android Redmi Xiaomi 7? And the screen saver there is just that twilight gold? yes ... the world of androids also changes the idea of ​​color.

Perfume? Here would clarify, the hero is a believer or an atheist? If he is a believer, then spirits will not come to him if he reads prayers and he has charms, and if he is an atheist he does not believe in spirits, therefore he cannot see them or there is an option that the character suffers from psychosis and sees glitches. There is another option, a person has received too excessively packetized information and his brain can’t cope with it. Therefore, what the brain cannot digest, it displays in the form of - some kind of shadows, trying to present the information in a visualized form. Then he needs to get enough sleep, engage in memory management, time management, drink Serakson sachets, so that clarity sets in his brain. Usually, such phenomena are accompanied by inflammatory processes. Or did he start the Blue Devils?

There are many options. As a reader, they have to speculate them, and the author must accurately give the direction of movement of the reader’s thoughts. So that later there would be no discrepancies in the thoughts of the author and the thoughts of the reader.

Alas ... there’s a ghost story, a character, scared, but I see his emotions, his body language doesn’t tell me anything, and his actions are cliche. In real life, a person can act very differently than what is displayed in films. Here it seems to me that the author would have better work out this moment.

And ... if it is closer to 3-4 o’clock in the morning, then the liver begins to work and a person may dream of all sorts of things if his brain is clogged with informational noise. Usually, the time when a person is most defenseless is before dawn, the sweetest dream.

Dialogues don’t work out for me either, so it’s hard to advise something, but in your dialogue, I’m starting to get confused. Although it seems to me that the story here is funny, nightly fears and horrors, and in the light of the sun, it turns out to be a curious misunderstanding. The original idea! A fascinating and unexpected denouement. But emotions are needed here, look at the dictionary of emotions, they show how a person reacts to this or another emotion. He moves his hands, turns his head, makes some gestures, he has sweat or tears. So that you, as an author, do not tell the reader, and that we readers see this (they also wrote to me recently in an honest review, they can give you 3 stars. But to point out your mistakes, I think this is quite true).

I wonder what language it is? The language of the new world? But I think I already heard him somewhere. The world is now big, it used to be hard to understand, now it’s a little easier. It seems like something I heard in KL at the airport. But I seem to have heard him already. But I could be wrong. Maybe this is a new language - a new world. Then this is separate respect, to create a new language like Klingon or Romulans from Star Trek, it would be very cool !!!

But the character is very arrogant, he does not use respectful speech, it seems he can be beaten, or even completely expelled.

But the story seems to be interesting. As I wrote earlier, it is very difficult to objectively evaluate the work of Chapter 1. I hope the author used the correct tags? If it is otherwise I will delete my review.

So far I can give 4.4 stars!

Included your book in the library, as updates I will add comments.

Thanks!

I note that the novel looks very promising and intriguing!