The Whispering Blade

I like the premise of the story very much and I think as far as setups go, this is done fabulously. The story shift is good and descriptions of character's emotions are great as well. Still, the story is in its initial stage so obviously there are some things that needs to be more explored for me to truly start loving this series. And in order for me to be able to do that, I'll stick around as one of your supporters. The only problem that really strikes me is update stability. I won't pressure you or anything but online readers get distracted if you make them wait too long. That said and done, you have done great work, author! Keep it up!

A great start to what I expect will become a phenominal novel! The contrast between white and black is a common but the writing leads me to believe that the roles of the two may not be as obvious in this particular story.

Intense!!! Enjoyed the scenery created at the Frestock grocery store. Mobs and chaos! Good and consistent with the main character's personality: helping those who are in need. Reminds me of the beginning of the chapter which led to Ezra's death when helping the couple with their car. Nice humor with the toilet paper too.

I stumbled across this novel on one of the forum posts and decided to give it a shot. I can happily say, it was worth the shot. Even though there are only three chapters at this point, they do not disappoint. Wishing the author the best with updating and developing the story. The novel is well written and I will definitely keep this in my collection anxiously awaiting new chapters.

The non-fiction reading machine that I am will occasionally find myself entrapped within the exciting world of fantasy literature. The start to this novel being a prime example, as the author has you feeling like you are sitting front row in this fantasy world, eager to see what transpires next. I look forward to reading the next phase of this novel and highly recommend it.

Like the development of the special abilities of each character. Also like the consistent publishing of the chapters. Like the journey of the main characters take to the parents house, feel like I am having the adventure with them as well.

Great development so far. Now 3 of the 5 powers have uncovered. Are there 2 more to join the team? Curious to see what's up next. Can't to see the journey between the 3 of them plus Sintra to get what Bel needs.

Good to have you back. It's about time after such a long pause. Good transition from a world of chaos to peace and sound sleep at home. Hope they learn to get in touch with their kira.

The beginning made my jaw drop. Every chapter after that has been incredible! The writing is phenomenal and I'm already so invested in the different characters. #TeamEli!!

Story is developing quite nicely. Little by little the background of the "other" world is explained but yet more details will follow later (I presume). I like the characters that interact with one another and as they journey thru the adventure, I can't wait to see how each of them is transformed.

Very nice. It has been long waiting for the chapter. Not disappointing. Can't wait to see what happened to Isa. Feel like the world in the story is as chaotic as the current event with CoronaVirus.

Great story so far! Very impressed. It grabs my attention to look forward to the next chapter to unfold. The characters are slowly building up and developed. Wonder what this Bel character is about! And where the heck is Isa? Can't wait!