Well first thing it is not your novel,
Then you are not even mentioning it's writer or site
Neither you are editing it
And just to fool us you are not even posting all of it's chapter's
For those who wants to read it go to comrademao.com and search for navy's dark admiral
5 years ago
1
amaturewriter
It was the title wasnt it....
now first of is the bounty 320000000 or 32000000....look point is its kinda confusing to read pls fix it...its interesting no doubt....
suggestion: OP MC...make MC save zerefs family and that way he joins marines?,....make MC a genius that became a vice admiral at 16?...make this world an AU,....its more fun....make MC save momonuskes sister?....give MC lightening devil fruit..through that MC can get telekinesis and plasma manipulation? and some romance and fluff... if harem keep it small
Well first thing it is not your novel, Then you are not even mentioning it's writer or site Neither you are editing it And just to fool us you are not even posting all of it's chapter's For those who wants to read it go to comrademao.com and search for navy's dark admiral
It was the title wasnt it.... now first of is the bounty 320000000 or 32000000....look point is its kinda confusing to read pls fix it...its interesting no doubt.... suggestion: OP MC...make MC save zerefs family and that way he joins marines?,....make MC a genius that became a vice admiral at 16?...make this world an AU,....its more fun....make MC save momonuskes sister?....give MC lightening devil fruit..through that MC can get telekinesis and plasma manipulation? and some romance and fluff... if harem keep it small