Star Wars: New Fate (Dropped)

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great story, as well as very well made with a constant update of new chapters. the story doesn't progress too quickly but not too slow either just perfect. keep up this amazing work.

I dont like star wars...make no mistake I love the characters..the lore...the weapons..I just dont like it cause theirs a **** ton of stuff but thats what makes it great,,,,so when I read FF's most of the time I dont understand some of the references..but some FFs write dope **** that despite not understanding you still enjoy it..this one is like that.its amazing ..only sad thing is that theres tragic **** here...maybe add some fluff and happiness to balance out the depressing **** like slavery and ****.BUT its still great...

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Really good story, amazing useage of star wars lore (at least legends) i need to feel this thing with 140 characters, keep up the good work author

Love the story. It's a great idea and I love the OC. Having a MC of a fanfic that isn't human was refreshing, and character development is great. The characters themselves are all nice and add to the plot nicely. Overall, my only complaint is that it seems dropped, I hope the author picks it back up again.

I am so enthralled by the world in which you have created within the canon of star wars making characters of your own and interacting with the canon characters. This fan fiction is top for star wars I just wish that there can be more chapter uploads. You have inspired me to think about making a star wars fan fiction as well I just need to think where it goes :) thanks again for this fan fiction my only negative of this fan fiction is the slow chapter release that is all.

Great story, I have learned a lot about the Star Wars universe and planets. I would recommend this as it has long chapters and great lore to be had.

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Despite the somewhat poor grammar and occasional improper word use, this is probably the best star wars fanfic I've read on this site. it's unfortunate that it's in hiatus, and I hope that it isn't actually dropped. if the author had this story edited and started posting again I'd give this story a 5 easily. even without further editing I'd love to see this story picked back up.

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Après avoir lu une 2eme fois pour trouver des failles Je dis bravo à l’auteur Mon anglais n'étant pas très bon, je reste neutre d'un point de vue grammatical Je me permets cependant d'écrire mon opinion de l'histoire, la conception des personnages et le contexte mondial L’histoire tiens le rythme les condition son possible dans le monde Star Wars. Puissance économique, militaire, politique sont nécessaire pour changer l’histoire, le mc n’est pas un bourrin qui agis sans réfléchir, il sait où sont les failles et exploite ses connaissances historiques Même si les changements déjà effectué influence déjà la guerre des clones. Spoiler : si Jango quitte les séparatistes maintenant, il y a peu de chance que ce soit lui qui tente d’assassiner la sénatrice, Obiwan ne peut plus remonter jusqu’à kamino. L’armée n’est donc pas découverte. La guerre peut débute d’une manière très différente. L’histoire peut prendre une tournure très différente Les personnages et leurs points de vue sont en constante évolution, la plus flagrante de tous est Lyn, qui évolue vraiment vite peut être même trop vite à mon gout. Le contexte mondial de star wars est un mélange de politique et de science-fiction et l’auteur intègre merveilleusement bien l’univers étendu dans le contexte mondial montrant les divisions jedi/jedi vert/sith et république/csi star wars n’est pas un endroit simple pour ecrire une fanfiction Tous mes encouragements et surtout n’abandonne pas. ^^ Je le classe dans le top 3 de mes fanfiction avec 1- Bend in time (harry potter) 2- Dragonborn saga (skyrim) 3- Star wars new fate (star wars) 4- Pokemon a mystical journey (pokemon)

Love it, want more. 😤