Tempest & Temptation
Author: NotBeatrix
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"--Very well." He exhaled sharply, loosening his shirt and tie with a prompt tug. "Since you don't believe me." He slid his uniform's necktie and slipped off his suit jacket.
Her eyes went wide. "What are you doing?!"
"Undressing. Is that not apparent?" He started unbuttoning his undershirt.
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A 21st century Jane Austen-inspired and Taming of the Shrew hybrid historical fiction love affair with snowballing romance, thrilling mystery and intrigue, dashed with a spice of the supernatural.
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Before I properly start the review I will say the following, while reading this I got some flash backs to Black Butler, one of the many anime I watched when I was starting to become a Otaku, and is one of the stories that I still follow to this day. Now the review, what can I say more than "I LOVE IT", honestly I don't even think I can come up with anything else but this to say, the seting is fantastic and the characters, god the characters are just amazing (Erin is the perfect type of MFL for this and it's a type of character I like a young lady from a rich family that is also spoiled and Ezra, our MML, he is so cool also the perfect choice for this, the way he plays with Erin makes me smile as I read this and hes also so mystirious that makes it even better!) and to top it all off this is very well written which is allways a plus! All in all I really liked this and you got yourself a fan!
If you are looking for a book with a well developed and unique storyline. This is the book for you. It has all the elements of a good story. Plot- captivating Characters- well developed and relatable. Author writing style- wonderful. Check out this book. You'll enjoy it.
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Your story is amazing. Characters, communication between them and building their feelings. Also, the setting and the mystery. Hope you don't leave such an amazing thing unfinished.
This is so entertaining 😂 ❤ I love their interactions. Ezra is like the dark, mysterious, handsome as hell kinda guy. There is some kinda mystery there. Superb language✨ keep it up👐
This is an enjoyable read. I like the pacing of the story and how well the characters had been introduced. I like it when I can hate the characters yet sympathize with them. There are few typos and grammar issues but the writing is still excellent. I like the detailed character description and how well the author can put the emotions into words. Keep on updating! :)
Let me start by saying that I really love this story. it's so funny. I really enjoyed reading this. the two leads make my heart jump! I get so excited thinking about their relationship and their progress. Please keep up the good work author. I[img=recommend] love your work
I soooooooo love this book. I love the character development, the plot setting. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The plot is so unique and quite different. I loved the leads of the story and their relationship is so beautiful. Also, this story is just so funny. I'll definitely like to read it till the end. All the best dear author!
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Great cover page! Orginal and catchy. The storyline is inetersting, your characters expressive... Everything is in place. You're doing a great job. Wish you endless inspiration and a lot of good ideas! Happy New Year!
Your story is quite well developed throughout the series of chapters. You have ensured to properly reflect the protagonist's personality. The plot is very interesting! Lol, I think you probably got a notification I added the book to my reading list.
Show don't tell, it's what happening in this story as it's very descriptive but in a good way! Characters are introduced in early chapters which help readers point who is who, good luck author!
I've been a fan of the devil being the embodiment of something true, not something completely evil. 93 chapters is a long way to read it shows how dedicated the author is, i also love how one chapter is divided into two hehe, amazingly written, the plot is something id love to see in an animeeee! keep it uppppp!!!
Quite a nice writing style. While dialogue is more used than descriptions about surroundings, readers can make a decent image in their mind by just reading through the dialogue. Which is an art in and of itself. I do like the characterization of the characters without using much description, which is --again-- a very good thing. I've noticed slight mistakes/missing words like missing 'his', 'theirs' and a single occasion of a misused word, so quite well-written. But none of these "mistakes" take away from the reading experience. The characters are all beautifully portraited with enough drama between secondary characters to make them interesting as well! Very nice job! If I make one suggestion for the future: Try to use more descriptions of surroundings. Most people have enough with your language ad dialogue and/or can imagine the scene right in front of them. Others can't or would like to have some help from the writer, at least. Last but not least, please keep up the work! You are doing brilliantly!