A young teen dies due to a natural disaster and gets the opportunity to go to another world.
He gets Reincarnated with the (Leading System).
He has to rebuild up his kingdom and army to be able to able to make his system stronger.
What adventures will he face and who will he meet?
I'm looking for feedback about my writing so I would appreciate it if you take a bit of time and give me some.
Thanks for Reading.
The story is very good ,but the grammar is a little rough sometimes. Not enough to make it a pain to read, but their is still some. I still highly recommend reading the story.
I really enjoy the story so far it’s one of the better novels that I have read here so far. The world building is excellent so far and I cannot wait to see how the story progresses. The only thing I can wish for is that there were a lot more chapters to read
:D .