(I hate being in pain, so I think I'll make a full defense build Fanfic.)
Kitamura Gram decided to play the VR game with his girlfriend Kaede Honjou and their best friend Risa Shiromine.
[ New World Online ]
Tried out a VR game? Of course they became too overpowered!
The story will follow the flow of the cannon from the web novel albeit had an impactful changes to the course of the story.
The cover photo is made by DeathEater.
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Wow a fanfic about Bofuri! 5 stars! Make him the strongest spear since maple is the strongest shield 🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇🎇
I have once again came here to deliver a review! Hah, it's just because I have nothing to do. Anyway, onto the main topic at hand. First of all, I'm not really picky with reading and writing a review on a story. As long as I read that the synopsis is good and the reviews is also mostly good (of course I would read the most detailed and informative review of them all not just those gibberish and pointless ones). So, this one is a good story in my book. Second, the story is the first fanfic about Bofuri that I've read so far so there is that. However, don't think that the story got good reviews just because it is the first fanfiction of that certain popular anime these days. The author surely knows how to do his thing so it is worth the read. Third, don't expect any serious scenes here or some dark and tragedy s****. Have you ever watched Bofuri? If yes, then you know that writing such a dark story around it is just not gonna cut it. The story is just too laid back and refreshing that you will find yourself hard pressed to write such things about our cute Maple. (Unless you have some weird fetishes and dark desires hidden within you, of course). Fourth, the grammar and writing style is great, I have no qualms about it. Hey, as long as it isn't some Google translate BS, it is good grammar in my book. Fifth, the chapter length is great! Not like those other novels who have only around ±500 and ±1000. The average word count would probably be around 2,500+. So, knock yourself off with reading it! Overall, the story is definitely great.
this is greath and don't dropped this novel, i hope you next the novel and i will waiting for you're fanfare fame and sory for my english because so bad
A great story so far! Oh, and, just to write this recommended/review, I searched up the original and read it once again. I saw some who gives some comments about the VIT stat scaling with HP but it was clear in the original that VIT doesn't scale with HP. HP and mana and mana scales with Lvl. It's actually kinda similar to Dota so I suggest you use the scaling in there. I think it was 1 level = 10 HP and 4 MP.
so far its great my only concern is the monster eggs during the 2nd event, will you add a third? and if so what kind of monsters will complement a glass cannon?
this is truly a very interesting novel. keep on holding up bro and continue your work. because your work brought me into it to enjoy it. FIGHT BRO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hope you keep making this it a really fun read.Hope you keep making this it a really fun read.Hope you keep making this it a really fun read.Hope you keep making this it a really fun read.
I Like your Novel and this is a relaxed story and makes me laugh with Kaede[Maple] cs behavior and i think so far your story is good Good work and Keep it up, make your story more and more fun
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FLUFFY FLUFFITY FLUFF!!! YER DOIN A GREAT JOB SO DO YER BEST TA CONTINUE! GIVE US THE FLUFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WANT FLUFF! WITH KAEDE AND RISA TOO!!!!!!
This is great! Amazing!! .......................................... ............................This is great! Amazing!! .......................................... ............................This is great! Amazing!! .......................................... ............................
More more more.....thanks for this good fanfic..... Hope more....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Maple get boyfriend she not get Yuri rute. How much He get luck like maple? Or use word spell I wait this update. Thanks for writing. See you again.
I love your story <3 more, please! ... ................................................................ UPDATE PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The way the author writes reminds me of the light novel and the anime. If knox was really in cannon I could believe it. really hoping for more updates from the author soon.