The student of University is being bored with his current life. With no interest in anything, he, one day finds himself in a delicate situation after stopping the robber on his way back from school that will change his entire until now boring life...Let's see how he will deal with his new life.
My English is bad so please be prepared before you will start reading this.
The credit for the cover goes to (Allchemic)
Good fucking prologue. The prologue could be a whole 100 chapter novel in of its self.
Awesome story! Cool and badass protagonist who is calm and collected. Its hard to find intelligent MC but the author is good at portraying them in his stories. I especially like how detailed the prologue is. There maybe some plotholes but it won't hamper your reading experience at all. If you're a casual reader like me who doesn't want perfection but just enjoyment while reading fanfic, then you'll like this story. I'm only at chapter 17 while writing this review and it's been damn good to read! The fight scenes are awesome. I can totally see author's passion while writing battle scenes. And most importantly the character development so far is good. The interaction between the MC and other characters are good and on point. The dialogue doesn't feel like a NPC script or whatever you call it. And the grammar of this story is good even though the author tells us that he's not a native speaker. Anyway I recommend you to give it a try. This story is a lot better than the heap of garbages that you call a fanfic in this site!
Your other Fanfic for Classroom of the Elite is amazing, And now with this new story I can now confirm that you are a really good author. Please always be able to update and write out chapters! For my thoughts on this new story are: Solid details, Proper Sentences, Fluid word choice(If I can count this) And of course Spelling! which of course is a strong point in both of your stories~ Please keep writing out the chapters!
Reading this novel is kinda boring so far. The mc doesn’t have the motivation to do anything and constantly keep thinking of suicidal thoughtful, his reactions are bland and doesn’t have any friends (by choice). Author are you ok?, is this your cry for help?.
author just destroyed the story, I hate nerf author just destroyed the story, I hate nerf author just destroyed the story, I hate nerf author just destroyed the story, I hate nerf author just destroyed the story, I hate nerf author just destroyed the story, I hate nerf
3.2 here. It's okay i guess, but i'm gonna stop here i think. The whole romance **** is taking too much place in the story. I came for akame ga kill, aka ruthless, and in those last chapter it's just all the time about chicks. It's corrupting the whole atmosphere of the story, i feel like i'm now in a slice of life with a too op mc and harem candidates. I can already tell how this **** will end and i won't lose more time with all of this. Too much romance kill the romance.
I nearly never review but I couldn't stop myself from reviewing this, despite being in its earliest chapters, a very long prolouge (9 chapters) that is really interesting, not the now too much repeated bored otaku or hero of the day, we got a bored person becoming an (spoiler😉) with a whole story, character development included, a really wonderful start. I don't give a 5 on world backgroud just because we are still in the prolouge. (just read it, it's worth the time)
Wtf!!! system tag please man.. just waisted my time with epic prologue just to start with that bullshit tf man... hope you step on a lego and fall on a bunch
This fiction is not Dark at all. It is dull 😑 and is filled with too much of sweetness, polite words and behavior of all characters. Some things makes no sense in this fiction, like Assassins calling themselves as Family like Mafia even when the main character doesn't care much about his own mother going as far as to erase her memories. There is some hypocrisy here. They justify them of killing others (targets) saying that targets are not good people for society 😒
Long ass chps..OP genius MC ....so far cant judge but quite interesting......a lazy kinda apathetic MC in an assassination org question; is the MC going to be an SI in the FF with all the knowledge cause would be nice..MC could be the emperors bro...and what does the dark tag mean?...I really dont want to read so dark FF filled with rape..gore ...and ****... Suggestion; IDK....OP MC,,,,,smart and lone one man army style.....just no perverted idiot.....maybe give MC some unique IM...like a fire one similar to ryjin jakka?....or one with sound powers?...maybe SUGARS ability from one piece but instead of toys its puppets?..from animals to humans?................add some romance and fluff just build it...dont make MC a man-whore or his lovers whores,,,,,no NTR..........
This story’s prologue is better than the actual story once he gets into the reincarnation he makes stupid decisions with the characters of the story
One of the best Akame ga kill fiction. - strong and smart mc - nice prolong describing mc’s personality perfectly - containing both series of akame ga kill - stable update along with superb writing quality All in all I suggest it's worth your time and power stone You won't regret it 👍🏻📝
Awesome story! Cool and badass protagonist who is calm and collected. Its hard to find intelligent MC but the author is good at portraying them in his stories.
Everyone who has watched Akame ga kill must read this. Even if you have not watched it still you must read this. This story have everything that should be required for a perfect fanfic. It have great story before reincarnation. It have great story after reincarnation. System is well thought without any messy skills or jobs. Character development is great. Basically everything is perfect and have more perfection than we can ask. WHY ARE YOU WASTING YOUR TIME READING THIS LENGTHY REVIEW GO AND READ THE STORY..
The MCbgot nerfed really hard. In the OC world he was supposed to be a genius where everything bores him. He was a perfect assassin who never made mistakes. But now in the akame world he does stupid things like talk before fighting, goes easy on opponents seeing that they are weaker than and plays with him, can't use his brain enough to get what he wants and he talks too sweet for my liking. His intelligence is nerfed. He forgot the most important things that his wife in the OC world taught him.