Highschool DxD: A Journey To The Top
Ikki Nagumo; an average teen with slightly above average performance in athletics. He was decently good-looking but nothing to really brag about. He had friends, albeit unique ones, and a loving older sister who payed for their house's bills while she was overseas.
But such an average life, filled with mediocrity, was soon to come to an end when a black maw-like hole appeared in his room and sucked him in.
The only way to get out of the hell it put him in? Kill the boss for the floor. What's the boss? A gigantic Minotaur.
(A/N - I mean, anyone who knows anything will get who I've combined to make this OC. Nagumo comes from Hajime Nagumo from Arifureta. Ikki comes from Ikki Kurogane from Rakudai Kishi. I'm not giving the MC Guns either. Who would want to use guns in a world of magic and supernatural abilities? That'd just be plain and boring as hell.)
I'll see where this is going, don't let him join any nobility, and for his harem consider: - grayfia. - yasaka. - Kuroka. - tiamat. - "· ingliv ·" leviatan. - sona sitri. - serafall. - rosewallse. - "amaterasu". etc. ----------------------- with his new personality, I wish he distanced himself from his friend, since he would suspect, and you know who would be watching him, that would be annoying.
Amazingly, you could think of such an incredibly immersive plot. Props to you, as a former DxD Fanfic writer myself I felt that your story is great and the development currently is amazing. Just finished read the 1st chapter and it's already incredible. Your description of development was profound and it engages the reader to perceive and relate to it more. Overall an amazing story, I just hope that you'll write longer chapters.
Just leaving a five-star rating. Will probably write a more in depth review later, if I'm not too lazy, that is. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------
It surely has potential, i am looking forward to how the story will unfold. I hope the character keeps progressing and has more personality than the OCs from other fanfics.
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Very nice to read.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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An interesting story showing a lot of promises. No beta MC; instead a protagonist who doesn't seem like the usual japanese protagonist. Think of Arifureta without going overboard (at some point, Hajime was interesting enough, but it went downhill.) and solo leveling.
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rias,tsubaki,sona,momo,akeno,koneko,kuroka,venelana,misla,amaterasu,rossweise,lady phenex,issei-female,ravel,tiamat,yasaka,kunou and orphis harem pls pls pls pls pls pls pls harem pls pls pls pls pls pls pls harem pls pls
I wish this had a lot more chapters, I feel like this is a double fanfic with both Solo-leveling and the Arifureta. Kiba is a total pal because he is friends with the mc. Dunno how this can develop, It can go with the whole lone wolf right off the get go. Or maybe he can ditch the school and Stealth over into the main events after some training montage. Overall the release rate for the chapters is cheesed, Hope we can get chapters someday~
Really, really good start. Easy to read, very good flow. 👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
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