Akame ga Kill: Starting with Dual Kamui

I've always wanted to read an Akame ga Kill fanfic with a harem where the ending isn't tragic. I never found a translation, so I decided to translate it myself. I hope you like it! Below is the original title of the novel and the author's name. This is a translation—I didn't include it in the story index to prevent it from being taken down by other platforms, ensuring that people who want to read the novel can still find it and know that a translation exists. Original Name: 斩赤红之瞳：从双神威开始最新章节列表 Original Author: 作者：文学少女

I really like the story but man you may not know but there is a rule in webnovel where if a translator translates a story, he must post at least 5 chapters every day.

In the middle of a serious conversation, if you want to hear sentences like "But aren't I so cute? - But do you love me that much too? - Oh, but MC'kun, please don't act like this" from all the female characters (you will definitely hear it, either now or in the future), read it.

I has lots of expectations when I started. But what the hell. I only read 2 chapters and I don't know if it gets better, but a lack of understanding of the characters, or even abilities was bad enough. The fact that esdeath, a general, couldn't dodge the hand of a guy only 2 times stronger than average (even if exhausted) and coincidentally her reactions are super slow, hesitant, etc. That's just bullshit. So many inconsistencies already, and it seems like it gets worse from some of the comments I read. How the hell do you know AGK takes place in an empire. And somehow that's the only piece of info you've got, to just bring up. Anyway, I'm venting. I'm even suspicious of the high rating. Maybe comments are being deleted, as it's shocking that almost no one has brought it up. But to those who remain, I hope you enjoy it.

Well, for the translation, I can't judge because I'm used to reading raw and mtl. But for the story, for me 9/10 is good because the original author also maintains the quality of his writing until the end.

Brain-dead novel °Sharingan that stays active but doesn't drain energy, yet does (try to figure that out) ° A main character so dumb that he MUST experience every trap and event to become aware (ultimate plot armor). ° A world where everyone drawn to the MC's eyes and try to take them, except the strong. ° Completely different personalities to the canon characters of Akame. ° Each chapter leaves you wondering why, with more plot holes than a Presidential Address. However, Aria is described as a cute, shy, insecure girl - so it all balances out.🙄

"The protagonist is useless. Canonically speaking, his Sharingan, even at the 3-tomoe stage, should be more than enough to surpass everyone in Akame ga Kill. At that level of development, the characters in that anime would move in slow motion for the Sharingan. Moreover, even without the Sharingan or the Mangekyou, the system he has is completely broken for that world. However, the protagonist doesn't have time to get stronger; in fact, he prefers to waste time playing politics."

Say what you will about being wrong about characters, the sharingan’s power, and the rather questionable plot(either you like politics and might enjoy it or not). But my main issue is that the MC is about as interesting as a cardboard box. He’s indifferent to everything. That’s about it. That’s all he amounts to. No real desires. No interesting thoughts. And is kinda just dragged around because “He’s new to the world and doesn’t know anything.” I like indifferent/apathetic MCs, but I at least want them to resemble a human and not a bot.

So far this story is incredible, please continue with the translation

English language writers are so stupid that they can't even properly balance the character. First of all, the Naruto universe is much stronger than the Akame ga Kill universe. And if from the first chapter we are shown that MC is a flawed character who somehow cannot cope with a weak beast (for the level of Mangekyo Sharingan). Something tells me that the author is a talentless person and doesn't know the lore of both universes.

You know, every time I keep telling myself; "There can't be a story worse than this." And sometimes I'm proven wrong... This is one of those times. * A complete and UTTER LACK of understanding the power of Mangeyko Sharingan. *The intelligence of a fetus. * Disregard of the characters personality makes for an exponentially terrible story.

Did you get this idea from the novel: Tokyo Ghoul: Mangekyo Sharingan? It has the same idea but different anime, I think?, or is it from the same author?

the story itself is good but there are just too many problem with the MC like even after 60+ chapter there is still nothing to his eronality it's just too 2D he doesn't have a goal or anything as well, we don't know what he was like in his previous like in the starting section his whole interection with esdeath is just strange, when he sees a noble assaulting a women and her child he got angry and killed him (that's okay any normal person in anger will take that step ) but after that he doesn't show anything like he just murdered someone yes the noble was guilty but after the anger it should have hit him and more crazy is after that he proceeds to kill all the people who didn't stop the noble like bruh the guards were helpless and after just becoming a mass murderer he doesn't show any emotion and don't misunderstand my "doesn't show any emotion" as in MC is ruthless or cold no he just lacks any type of personality after becoming a mass murdere from a normal citizen he process to ride a horse to the capital like how does he know how to rides a horse you might think it's a small detail but around ch 40 he rides a dragon (similarly to esdeath) but like how tf he know how to ride it and like I said he doesn't have a personality while riding a dragon he doesn't show excitement or fear or any emotion like WTF and on his first day he become a vice captain directly under oger and like bro he doesn't study the law or anything in this world and proceeds to go raid a nobleman house on his first day of being transmigrated and after that cause of esdeath he gets promoted to the commander to assassination unit the same in which kurome is and after becoming the commander it's good that he doesn't treat them harshly like the previous commender but what now he proceeds to train them to hunt beasts like bro they are assassins and one of the most important thing all this happend in like weeks not months but weeks of being reincarnated so i ask you if you get reincanated and becomes a commader of a assassin unit you would learn to how to train or nay thing right but no he was a normal citizen so hoe does know how to use dual sword not a single but dual sword he also trains syre who most probably already have 100x more combat exp them him so overall MC's personality is non existent on one side he teaches syre to not judge everyone as pure evil or pure juistce but on the other hand proceeds to kill the guards who can't do anything to the noble

Really good so far. Can't wait to read more.