Starting as a Ninja in the Naruto World

since there isn't enough review to promote this book—which I believe is a translation—I'm gonna do one. it's to be taken into account I've currently read up to chapter 14 (the latest as i'm writing this). Writing quality (5) : it's good. nothing extravagant, it's smooth, no errors. much better than most translations you're gonna find, I think. simple yet good for a simple read; something I prefer. there's no info dump and neither cringe dialogue. the narration is pretty funny, though sometimes exaggerated. i'd say, those who want a completely serious story will not always be satisfied, but i'd recommend trying it out since it's not that overwhelming with the MC being the main perpetrator behind the funny narration. Stability of updates (5): many chapters already and it started not too long ago if I remember correctly—14 chapters in 6 days to be exact. Story development (5): up to now, the initial idea is pretty original. however, the direction it's headed seems pretty simple—or mysterious as it hasn't been completely revealed since the author has merely left clues— but, hey, as long as it's enjoyable, i'm all for it. a simple idea doesn't make it a bad idea. Character design (5): what I enjoy the most about this story is the interactions between the characters. their persona is really well represented (maybe a bit too caricatured sometimes, though). the MC has a system it seems, but its influence is almost null up to now (and i'm a system hater). he's also really smart from what I've read, though Zetsu seems a bit too dumb when it comes to MC (it's funny though). however, I could accept his slightly reduced IQ when it concerns the MC due to the circumstances of their meeting—also, it makes the story more enjoyable in this case. World background (5): while the story, being in its beginning, is pretty limited in content, from what I've read, the author was able to integrate the history of the Naruto world and its present dynamic very well. ***sorry, if this isn't a translation (i just saw there wasn't any disclaimer about it being a translation). i might've mistaken it for one since Michael, the webnovel author, usually does translations. though, if it is a translation, putting a disclaimer would be preferable. everything else I've said previously remains true, however.

it's a really good story so far, it's a great read

Not bad for start, black zetsu emotional tsk tsk author you have great imagination. The thing is the moment the mc come back with his real corps, who can stop him ? After all, rinnegan + eternal Sharingan , its an op configuration

Pretty well written, story building is valid. It makes sense so far, no plot holes yet, keep it up. More chapters pls