Riches and Power
Author: fading_flower
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What would life be if you only pursued wealth, fame and power? When you aren't supposed to pursue love and enjoy life the way you want to.
In a world of angel like creatures —
Belinda was born into a society where she was raised to be successful, wealthy and with power. She lived the so called perfect life for 18 years until an unexpected disturbance comes...
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NOTE: the start of the story may seem like a human average business woman story- but PLEASE GIVE IT A TRY EVERYTHING WILL MAKE MORE SENSE AND BECOME OBVIOUS LATER!!! All the non human elements will start appearing a few more chapters in and also there’s NO MARRIAGES OR ROMANCE!!!
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Author here giving a shameless review :) I personally think I have much to improve with my story- I probably ramble on too much about irrelevant things that aren’t as important to the plot, my paragraphs are uneven etc. Haha but keep in mind 1) I’m human so obviously I’ll make errors 2) I’m not a pro writer or anything 3) I’m not 15 yet sooo that’s just a bit about me But THANK YOU to those people reading this, adding it to their library, commenting etc ❤️❤️❤️
The novel is progressing quite well so far. It’s still at its beginning phase in my opinion so there’s much more that can be done to improve etc. The characters have their own personality, however the female mc isnt mentioned often enough in my opinion, after all this is for the prompt competition. Hopefully she’ll take a more major role as the plot progresses. Writing is readable and understandable, maybe a few errors here and there, but overall ok. The use of language though could be improved to make the novel more engaging. I would say this is worth a try reading, look forward to seeing the novel progress.