Jin's Journey
Author: MKSS
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When Jin turned 18 his family trow him away. He had nothing to do but some how his life turned in better way. But that didn't last long he was betrayed by his only friend. Not long after he was killed. Unexpectedly he woke up in new world. This story will tell you how Jin's life changed, what mistakes he makes and how he will correct them.
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Honestly, this story is very unnatural, imagine the world we live in, with all sources of information and knowledge, so unless the person is raised in a kind of social glass dome, where it is isolated or something like that it is very more very difficult even to be as naive as this MC has been. Well honestly seeing the extremely naive behavior of the MC in two lives in a row reaches a point of being almost unbelievable and that makes the story not a quality, the narrative of that naivety that made the story start seems like something forced and as I said and I repeat totally unnatural.
MC got betrayed and ****ed by everyone, Then in second life this dude didnt learn to be smarter or even attempt to gain knowledge about his new world. The chps were quite ****ty, like several years just passed by and there was no story or nothing, no events, no development, no info, nothing. Then MC's mom just dies, again no explanation, hell there wasnt even any character development between MC and mom. The story also dosnt seem to have an OP MC, cause he is so stupid, dude just trusts anyone [chp 3]....dosnt even gain any special ability in two chps despite the fact that in one chp alone, several years have passed by. Not trying to bash but kinda ****ty.....I suggest a re-write. -yes only 3 chps have been released but all them seem ****ty cause they seem unplanned and rushed..