Heavenly Dao Emperor

Despite eastern fantasy is not my genre, I like this work. It has a certain potential. The character empowerment system is complete and well described. English grammar may be better, but I hope it will grow day by day. Don't stop writing, this novel may be a really good one!

Hi ppl, If anyone is fretting whether to read or not. I suggest u to give it a go. It's worth it. But there are grammatical mistakes in it. One look at this book one can say it is a ******* work. Even though it is a amatuer it is good. It is little funny. The story is going with a good flow. The story is good. But the progress of the story depends how the author writes it in the future. And there are some points where one can gain knowledge too. Anyways, all the best author. Hope u will do it good and will not disappoint the readers. 😇

This is a nice eastern fantasy story! I recommend it! I’ve never touched eastern fantasy story with male as the MC before, but this is quite refreshing. The beginning has already piqued my curiosity. Writing style wise, I won’t argue much abt the grammar although yes I think there’s a room for improvement. The plot itself is exciting. What I love the most is the character building bcos the author takes their time in building the characters. I can see the distinct personalities between them. And finally, it’s so refreshing to see such a nice family like Qin. I hv enough of my share with evil sisters and concubine. Thank you. Anyway, keep up the good work author! 👌

You need to read this if you really like the genre of Easter Fantasy since it had a good character and the pacing of the story is also good. The world itself is also beautiful. Reading every chapters give you different kind of emotion which is good ! Worth to read!

An action and adventurous story with fighting and thrill. I am kind of loving it. So far it's nice Looking forward to more chapters. Keep the work😊😊

Nice novel author-san, thou there are some grammatical mistakes. you are writing pretty good and the story is going pretty well. and, I think romance is a bit early and can create some chemistry between characters.

Really an enticing novel its going better way than I thought its really good and I recommend it for you also in the first I didn't really liked as I was thinking just to see what kind of novel it is! It literally really caught my attention and its not just your regular kind of novels but have its own building type mystery background, op parents, adopted its just a somehow like M G A but our mc kinda be op

An action-packed novel, cultivation, and rich world background. We start the adventure of the mc. The fight scenes are good and the story is quite engaging. Keep up the work and good luck!

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The story is quite refreshing. Even tho this kind of genre is not my type. I think Overall the character is a tsunerde.If possible fix the grammatical problems

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